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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
Murderous Mask 5 83.33%
Tenken 1 16.67%
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Old 04-22-04, 02:50 PM   #1
Tenken
Banned: Racism
 
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Tenken vs Murderous Mask

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aight heres the rules

No D/R
crew votes
No Hate Votes
no biting
no prewriten
10-15 lines max
no recycled lines


you spit first
 
Old 04-22-04, 02:53 PM   #2
Enhance
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You dint say i spit first .. in that case il spit later . . i thought u gonna spit first.
 
Old 04-22-04, 03:05 PM   #3
Tenken
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aight wuteva ill spit first
 
Old 04-22-04, 03:27 PM   #4
Tenken
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aight check it

this kids chances of winnin are "long" like "Jay Leno's Chin"//
his level compared to mine is "gapped" bigger then Morpheus & "David Letterman"//

i got this guy eatin "jello" outta my hand like "Bill Cosby"//
He on da show "Kids say the darnest things" he replied "i fucked my mommy"//

This guy claims hes a "Flyweight" juss because hes free postin//
i "fried" & "barb'ed" this "chicken" after he was done "Roastin"//

What this guy thinkin he aint no "Phantom of the Opera"//
he juss a "mask on display" in the "Marine Worlds Aqua"//

*POW!!* now this nigga studdering worse than "Elmer Fudd"//
Im done wit this "toon" *splash* "i wash my hands of this kids Blood"//
 
Old 04-24-04, 10:59 PM   #5
Spinemore
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Tenken
aight check it

this kids chances of winnin are "long" like "Jay Leno's Chin"//
his level compared to mine is "gapped" bigger then Morpheus & "David Letterman"//

i got this guy eatin "jello" outta my hand like "Bill Cosby"//
He on da show "Kids say the darnest things" he replied "i fucked my mommy"//

This guy claims hes a "Flyweight" juss because hes free postin//
i "fried" & "barb'ed" this "chicken" after he was done "Roastin"//

What this guy thinkin he aint no "Phantom of the Opera"//
he juss a "mask on display" in the "Marine Worlds Aqua"//

*POW!!* now this nigga studdering worse than "Elmer Fudd"//
Im done wit this "toon" *splash* "i wash my hands of this kids Blood"//


Great stuff.
 
Old 04-25-04, 02:50 PM   #6
Shadows edge
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this kids chances of winnin are "long" like "Jay Leno's Chin"//
his level compared to mine is "gapped" bigger then Morpheus & "David Letterman"//
ok... "change of winning" punches are getting played.. not a great opener.. morpheus and david letterman have nothing to do with each other
i got this guy eatin "jello" outta my hand like "Bill Cosby"//
He on da show "Kids say the darnest things" he replied "i fucked my mommy"//
wtf does jello have to do with this? that second line was ok, but try to relate the two lines together somewhat
This guy claims hes a "Flyweight" juss because hes free postin//
i "fried" & "barb'ed" this "chicken" after he was done "Roastin"//
the first line made very little sense, the second line is meh
What this guy thinkin he aint no "Phantom of the Opera"//
he juss a "mask on display" in the "Marine Worlds Aqua"//
right....
*POW!!* now this nigga studdering worse than "Elmer Fudd"//
Im done wit this "toon" *splash* "i wash my hands of this kids Blood"//
probably your best line, but not that impressive

Remarks of talent , i`m ill against me? - dont ever risk it . .
Your nobody to me ... so i dont need to wish you NEVER Exsisted.
pretty ok punch, nice rhyme.
U dope? Nah... Reaching skill? well it`s not that i dout you.
but how am i gonna battle you , when i dont know shit about you.
i tihnk i've seen that punch before...
I`ll rape this kid , sit back & Watch I could be michael jackson.
I`ll have you saying " MM is the best" - because of my vital actions.
the micheal jackson line is whack.. the second line.. meh
You calling me wack ? think fast . . let me remind this fool.
he pm`s me and its like.... " what do think of these lines dude"
nice, nice personal but its kinda played...
Want to make cash in the game ?... only way is if you bet , I WIN.
& i`ll make a whole in chest , so big sadam could Hide In.
very nice first line, second line is pretty ok
I would only feed of you , not for skill but if i was starving . .
I`m the bomb & my skill will never be caught like osma binlardin.
decent closer, the feed off you line could have been worded better

ok so overall.. I wasn't feeling tenken at all.. man you gotta take those concepts and metahs and turn them into hard hitting punches.. alot of yours were just whack.

v/ mm

hit back my battle against killah....
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Old 04-22-04, 03:31 PM   #7
puertoricanelly
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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117057 Vote on this catz and then PM me and ill return tha fava HERES THE LINK
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Old 04-22-04, 03:46 PM   #8
Tenken
Banned: Racism
 
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hey man wtf you ran off da site once i posted wtf is up wit that
 
Old 04-23-04, 12:23 PM   #9
Enhance
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Remarks of talent , i`m ill against me? - dont ever risk it . .
Your nobody to me ... so i dont need to wish you NEVER Exsisted.
U dope? Nah... Reaching skill? well it`s not that i dout you.
but how am i gonna battle you , when i dont know shit about you.
I`ll rape this kid , sit back & Watch I could be michael jackson.
I`ll have you saying " MM is the best" - because of my vital actions.
You calling me wack ? think fast . . let me remind this fool.
he pm`s me and its like.... " what do think of these lines dude"
Want to make cash in the game ?... only way is if you bet , I WIN.
& i`ll make a whole in chest , so big sadam could Hide In.
I would only feed of you , not for skill but if i was starving . .
I`m the bomb & my skill will never be caught like osma binlardin.
 
Old 04-23-04, 01:34 PM   #10
Enhance
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Upppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinn n
 
Old 04-23-04, 02:24 PM   #11
Tenken
Banned: Racism
 
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uppin 4 VOTES
 
Old 04-23-04, 03:18 PM   #12
Enhance
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Upin 4 hoes ..........................................votes
 
Old 04-23-04, 03:45 PM   #13
Enhance
Seriously , I'm i`ll man.
 
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FUck yo hood if u dont vote......... bitchy ass niggggaz
 
Old 04-23-04, 04:17 PM   #14
Enhance
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UPN PLEEEEEEEEEEEASAEEEEEEEEE VOOOOOOOOOOOOOOTE.kkk
 
Old 04-23-04, 04:21 PM   #15
K-Trin
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Tenken had this battle.Mask,you need to step up alittle with the punches.Those were weak in cmparison to tENKEN.keep working though,you'll be better
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