aight heres the rules

No D/R
crew votes
No Hate Votes
no biting
no prewriten
10-15 lines max
no recycled lines


you spit first

You dint say i spit first .. in that case il spit later . . i thought u gonna spit first.

aight wuteva ill spit first

aight check it

this kids chances of winnin are "long" like "Jay Leno's Chin"//
his level compared to mine is "gapped" bigger then Morpheus & "David Letterman"//

i got this guy eatin "jello" outta my hand like "Bill Cosby"//
He on da show "Kids say the darnest things" he replied "i fucked my mommy"//

This guy claims hes a "Flyweight" juss because hes free postin//
i "fried" & "barb'ed" this "chicken" after he was done "Roastin"//

What this guy thinkin he aint no "Phantom of the Opera"//
he juss a "mask on display" in the "Marine Worlds Aqua"//

*POW!!* now this nigga studdering worse than "Elmer Fudd"//
Im done wit this "toon" *splash* "i wash my hands of this kids Blood"//

Great stuff.

this kids chances of winnin are "long" like "Jay Leno's Chin"//
his level compared to mine is "gapped" bigger then Morpheus & "David Letterman"//
ok... "change of winning" punches are getting played.. not a great opener.. morpheus and david letterman have nothing to do with each other
i got this guy eatin "jello" outta my hand like "Bill Cosby"//
He on da show "Kids say the darnest things" he replied "i fucked my mommy"//
wtf does jello have to do with this? that second line was ok, but try to relate the two lines together somewhat
This guy claims hes a "Flyweight" juss because hes free postin//
i "fried" & "barb'ed" this "chicken" after he was done "Roastin"//
the first line made very little sense, the second line is meh
What this guy thinkin he aint no "Phantom of the Opera"//
he juss a "mask on display" in the "Marine Worlds Aqua"//
right....
*POW!!* now this nigga studdering worse than "Elmer Fudd"//
Im done wit this "toon" *splash* "i wash my hands of this kids Blood"//
probably your best line, but not that impressive

Remarks of talent , i`m ill against me? - dont ever risk it . .
Your nobody to me ... so i dont need to wish you NEVER Exsisted.
pretty ok punch, nice rhyme.
U dope? Nah... Reaching skill? well it`s not that i dout you.
but how am i gonna battle you , when i dont know shit about you.
i tihnk i've seen that punch before...
I`ll rape this kid , sit back & Watch I could be michael jackson.
I`ll have you saying " MM is the best" - because of my vital actions.
the micheal jackson line is whack.. the second line.. meh
You calling me wack ? think fast . . let me remind this fool.
he pm`s me and its like.... " what do think of these lines dude"
nice, nice personal but its kinda played...
Want to make cash in the game ?... only way is if you bet , I WIN.
& i`ll make a whole in chest , so big sadam could Hide In.
very nice first line, second line is pretty ok
I would only feed of you , not for skill but if i was starving . .
I`m the bomb & my skill will never be caught like osma binlardin.
decent closer, the feed off you line could have been worded better

ok so overall.. I wasn't feeling tenken at all.. man you gotta take those concepts and metahs and turn them into hard hitting punches.. alot of yours were just whack.

v/ mm

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hey man wtf you ran off da site once i posted wtf is up wit that

Remarks of talent , i`m ill against me? - dont ever risk it . .
Your nobody to me ... so i dont need to wish you NEVER Exsisted.
U dope? Nah... Reaching skill? well it`s not that i dout you.
but how am i gonna battle you , when i dont know shit about you.
I`ll rape this kid , sit back & Watch I could be michael jackson.
I`ll have you saying " MM is the best" - because of my vital actions.
You calling me wack ? think fast . . let me remind this fool.
he pm`s me and its like.... " what do think of these lines dude"
Want to make cash in the game ?... only way is if you bet , I WIN.
& i`ll make a whole in chest , so big sadam could Hide In.
I would only feed of you , not for skill but if i was starving . .
I`m the bomb & my skill will never be caught like osma binlardin.

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Tenken had this battle.Mask,you need to step up alittle with the punches.Those were weak in cmparison to tENKEN.keep working though,you'll be better