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Old 04-22-04, 08:00 PM   #1
Identity2k
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From: 3*0*5
Blood,sweat,tears

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i wrote this in class today holla bak

I run it in rap, and have to show-no-fears//
but cant hide the fact my pillow is soaked-with-TEARS//
hold my head above, trying not to sink-in-da-mud//
spit my heart and replace ink-with-BLOOD//
spit half of my life, and expose-da-rest//
all to get dem dollars soaked-in-SWEAT//
the BLOOD, the SWEAT, the TEARS, i put in the pot*//
all to bluff or fold on a hand i thought was hot//
but if u play ur cards rite, u can pull a full house//
throughout, a long life where quittin is ruled out//
FIGHT FIRE wit WATER nigga and play da game smart//
build up pounds of courage, and TONS of heart//
prepare for the worse and hope for the best//
and follow the pounding inside of ya chest//
FEAR NO MAN, equality is the worlds downfall//
but i'm of higher man and i wear the crown yall////////

pot* the pot is where the money from bets goes in during a poker game
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ya numba done came// and crumbled ya fame//
into a ball' a umbrulla disolves into flames// u under my REIGN//-Royce da 5'9''

why do it// knowin u can light my saliva like lighta fluid//-Royce da 5'9''
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Old 04-23-04, 03:56 PM   #2
Identity2k
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From: 3*0*5
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yo i'd like some feedbak yall come on. HIT ME UP
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ya numba done came// and crumbled ya fame//
into a ball' a umbrulla disolves into flames// u under my REIGN//-Royce da 5'9''

why do it// knowin u can light my saliva like lighta fluid//-Royce da 5'9''
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Old 04-25-04, 01:50 AM   #3
KKbug
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From: u tell me
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iight i really liked it, and yea i kno it'z hard to get feedback from these people.Most of these people will pull you down jus' to see you crawl,but you did good man, nice drop!
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