lets do the damn thang'


10 lines
you spit first
no d/r cv or biting
no feedin
good luck

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KiLlAh BwOy

so im gonna hit, spit and then shit you out,
you dont even know what this games about,
all that im trying to say is that boy you whack,
almost as much as how many women you smack,
you fuckin discust me with the way you act,
so shut the hell up before you even start,
or ill rearange your face like in picasso's art.
now im out of the game like grant hill,
you think your a killa, well let me arrsure you this,
the only thing you kill is the ants when you piss.

you spit now

Rip you to shreds shatter your bones then burn your grave....../
That's what I do to wack motha fuckaz that come my way....../
Bitch you don't know who you facin' You losin' quick like me and a turtle racin'../
Out of 5 people 6th is what you placin' smash ya skill and bash your face-in...../
Rip out your your chest and put your heart on your rhymes so now you spit from the heart...../
Piece by piece im rippin' your rhymes apart...Nothin but sky for miles and you tryin' to climb to the top of the charts...../
BOOM BOOM POP POP, Make revell DROP DROP.....Leave your body cut and CHOPPED CHOPPED..../
Put a stop sign infront of your lyrics So Your wack rhymes STOP STOP........./
Pick up the remote and put this kids voice on mute..Your Rhymes is droppin' faster than a ripped parachute...../
Oh this kids real scary talkin' bout IF YOU DONT STOP MERKIN' ME IM GOIN' TO THROW A PEAR AT YOU......./



whoa now that was wack..all well look at his verse lmfao

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KiLlAh BwOy

Aight yo killah bwoy fucked this kid up wit ease.. revell to simplistic and didnt even flow good need better flow and more hotness next time yo killah fly punches and personals always got me sayin oh snap./...jhaha vote

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^^ yep.. revel your lines were simplistic, your punches weak.. overall just not good. killa, the closer was a really nice rhyme, and had my smiling. the punches you had were a bit played, but the verse itself was way more complex and the punches came harder.

v/ killa, no question.

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RIP SMOKAJOKA WE WILL MiSS YOU!!!!!!

yo revell get a battle wit a nebie kid. u had one thing if u was good u mighta been able to look good wit it
or ill rearange your face like in picasso's art.
dont be so plain wit your punches, flow into 'em and make 'em hit harder.

killah's obvious got this one, level aint matched up.

vote- killah

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yo killah and reveal...i'll give my honest vote on this if yall give an honest vote on mine

QUICKPUNCH VS INSIDIOUS

Haha...this was one of the sadest battles that I have ever seen. Revell...you have got to werk on a lotta shit. Werk on everythin' dawg...your verse could have been worse, but just werk on your punches. Your structure is good...flow is tite, just the ryhme scheme throws the flow off a bit...Killah...I have seen better from you, but you spit enought to beat him.

Vote- Killah

No hate...hit this up honestly...thx...

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120132

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killa-took it to him...better punches rhyme,vocab,structure,flow everything was good...lol still say if i battled u again it'll be close...cause were about the same we have our let downs...keep coming hard

OTHA KAT-start of by battling NEWBS,i guess ur shit was ok for a newb...get betta vocab...like evry1 else flow is always good...so is structure...noo multies u dont even kno wht that is prolly....TO ME A BATTLE COMES DOWN 2 PUNCHES NOT MULTIES OR STRUCTURE AND SHIT..SO THATS WHY I GAVE MY VOTE TO KILLAH

so im gonna hit, spit and then shit you out,
you dont even know what this games about,(ok that was pretty weak open,but pretty decent 5/10)
all that im trying to say is that boy you whack,
almost as much as how many women you smack,
you fuckin discust me with the way you act,(wasnt feelin it 4/10)
so shut the hell up before you even start,
or ill rearange your face like in picasso's art.(ok pretty decent 5/10)
now im out of the game like grant hill,(where in the fuck did this line come from 2/10)
you think your a killa, well let me arrsure you this,
the only thing you kill is the ants when you piss.(weak ending 4/10)
overall 20/50 u need to elevate work on ur punchlines and shit once u start battlin more u will get better keep it up overall grade F

Rip you to shreds shatter your bones then burn your grave....../
That's what I do to wack motha fuckaz that come my way....../( oh snaps way better than his 7/10)
Bitch you don't know who you facin' You losin' quick like me and a turtle racin'../
Out of 5 people 6th is what you placin' smash ya skill and bash your face-in...../(aight wasnt feelin it but still better than his 7/10)
Rip out your your chest and put your heart on your rhymes so now you spit from the heart...../
Piece by piece im rippin' your rhymes apart...Nothin but sky for miles and you tryin' to climb to the top of the charts...../(it was aight could of hit harder though 7/10)
BOOM BOOM POP POP, Make revell DROP DROP.....Leave your body cut and CHOPPED CHOPPED..../
Put a stop sign infront of your lyrics So Your wack rhymes STOP STOP........./(wtf it was aight 7/10)
Pick up the remote and put this kids voice on mute..Your Rhymes is droppin' faster than a ripped parachute...../
Oh this kids real scary talkin' bout IF YOU DONT STOP MERKIN' ME IM GOIN' TO THROW A PEAR AT YOU......./(ending was aight no bigie 7/10

overall 35/50 u did good but anyone could of bet him but anyways u could of hit harder wit ur punches i know u could of did better i wouldent of tried either
vote goes to killa hands down