10 lines
don't suck.

Yo Denver U Bout To Get Merked Iam Fo Real// Yo Lc Merked Dis Kid

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IAM BACK FUCKAH'Z HELL~! NEVA LOOKED SO GOOD

Aight if you insist................................

my visions 20/20 but i can't see your skill
i battle bitches like you just for a cheap thrill
a battle against me, is a battle uphill
you might get better soon, but i'm not gonna wait until
You're right about yourself, you're just a scared lost child
you'd think you'd find a friend after all those numbers you dialed
but if anyone talked to you, they'd get embarassed
i'm sorry if that hurt, go see a therapist
just give it up now, you're not going anywhere
cause you're probably better off working at a day care.

Me and you damn this gone be quickie
Come to hood you get shot more times than fifthy

2 in yo thigh, 7 in your chest, 1 in your eye
The difference between you and him you wont survive

I came from the hood you came from the gutta
My carear gone be bigger than Ruberd Studdard

Your record 0-3, just add another lost
Paid the cost to be the boss but you to damn soft

I'm a have to murder you like Jay-z did Nas
Yo crew a be missin a member like Chillie and T-Boz

I Told U Was Going To Get Merked Kid I Told U// U Have Nothin No Flowz// No Vocab// Not Even A Single Punchline//

Vote=lc

Vote disqualified for suspected d/r. Crew vote removed - strobe

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IAM BACK FUCKAH'Z HELL~! NEVA LOOKED SO GOOD

uppin for votes...................................

yo Denver max u betteh then dat but to tell the trufh u Got MERKEd Dogg u had not enough PUNCHES Dat lost it

as for u lost child u sick boy u got diss 1 like a man witta wallet punches good Structure good

Vote LOSTCHILD

Yo return da favor but state da truth me vs Vinman and me vs SPIKY2k8

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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120187
^^^vote in mines since I voted in urs.

Okay,let see.Dever,you need to read tutorials and and read these other guy's raps.Make ur raps longer.I'm not tellin u how long cause you gonna make that desicion ur self after u find out which lenght is most comfortable to you.But ur raps was not hard enough.Make the other guy feel stupuid.

Vote-Lost Child

uppin for votes......................................

ok check it

battle wasnt to hot lost child got it for punchs and decent personals denver you had a nice flow just wasnt many good personals or punchs you had a few but they were weak man work on uppin in that area and lost child decent verse work on harder punchs and wordplay

vote lost child

hit this up with an honest vote since ijust voted on this
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120363

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denver max i hate to say it but u jus got merked

lost child beat u in almost everything
vocab- denver
punches- lost child
flow-lost child
structure- lost child

vote= lost child

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lost child beat u in almost everything u need mad elevation kid work and ull get better
vocab- denver
punches- lost child
flow-lost child
structure- lost child

vote= lost child
lost work on vocab and structure
denver work on vocab personas and structure

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