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TeK 5 62.50%
MCelmersglue 3 37.50%
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Old 04-25-04, 11:37 PM   #1
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MCelmersglue v.s. TeK

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Ok, rules are spit out 10 to 12 lines and the people will vote,..here's mine...


No funny introductions and no fancy smoke and mirrors production, this is a cataclysmic battle of mass proportions; my victory your misfortune\\
You must have been thinking about a TeK-9 when you made your name\\
Too bad when you look into your denim you find a speck of a 4 that's really lame\\
You must be educated that you are inferior\\
Tu-Pac, he's assasinated so take his CD our of your car's interior\\
I could go on and on about the science of freestyle and it's biology\\
But we all know you can't even pass English because you spelled Jim with a "G"\\
The only reason I graced you with my presence is to teach you a lesson\\
That even though your respect is going to seriously lessen\\
These sick flows you're NEVER bestin'\\

*Pushes his glasses up*
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Now some of you will act like George Bush and always be on the attack, and it's probably just because I'm not black
Which is understandable but it doesn't make my flow any less wack
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Old 04-25-04, 11:46 PM   #2
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Is this kid dissen Pac or is he just tryin to *Rhyme*
But Pac's cd's only Grow better with *Time*
Ill break this kid into so many pieces hell need more the Elmers *Glue*
He came at me tryin to be hard but he bite of more then he could *Chew*
You talk about Given me a lesson like ur a *Teacher*
But your in My School and im the Highlighted *Feature*
Im the one up on Stage and ur stuck sitten on the *Bleacher*
This Flow comes straigt from the head of a Lyrical *MasterMind*
Since i just drop the hottest Flows ur Victoty has been *Declined*

ight Uppin votes
 
Old 04-25-04, 11:49 PM   #3
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Um, that was 9 lines but it's cool I guess
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Old 04-25-04, 11:53 PM   #4
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ok my vote goes to mc elmers glue under theese circumstances

I dont like the bull hist with the stars on you punchlines...Tek

I dont like how you feed of his verse that isnt allowed...tek..

Punches didnt come as hard as Mc...Tek

I like the name Mcelmersglue....

Flow was off in mc's verse compaired to teks i think tek would have had this one if it wasnt for feeding off his verse... yo return da favor
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Old 04-26-04, 12:14 AM   #5
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Ok, I've got to go into my room and conduct experiments in dream interpretation by slipping into a mild coma, can people start voting, how hard can it be?

Either Tek schooled me or lyrically busted him so bad he developes and eating disorder and I automatically win.
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Old 04-26-04, 01:05 AM   #6
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I thout tek killed it. His flowed better. Elmer your lines were too long and if that line about pac was supposed to be a diss, u need to learn somethin.
Tek u didnt go too hard on this though but i thought it was over all the better verse.
I liked this
Ill break this kid into so many pieces hell need more the Elmers *Glue*
He came at me tryin to be hard but he bite of more then he could *Chew*
Without that bar elmer might have had a chance cuz i wasnt feelin either one too much but im voting tek
 
Old 04-26-04, 04:13 PM   #7
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Haha, really?
His lines were textbook corny and his flow represented like Dr. Suess, effin' elementary.
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Old 04-26-04, 04:37 PM   #8
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no hate or nuffin but i give dis battle to TeK he had siccer rhymes.
 
Old 04-26-04, 04:45 PM   #9
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TeK didn't even follow the rules first of all..
Second of all man his lyrics are more childish than Lil' Bow Wow.
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Old 04-26-04, 05:16 PM   #10
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UPPIN' the EFFIN' voooooootes come on people this is retarted
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Old 04-26-04, 05:47 PM   #11
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Uppin' uppin' uppin', come on guys vote for who schooled who
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Now some of you will act like George Bush and always be on the attack, and it's probably just because I'm not black
Which is understandable but it doesn't make my flow any less wack
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Old 04-26-04, 05:59 PM   #12
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Elmer you talk mad shit for bein weak.Dont be a punk cause im winnen dont let it ruin ur life.
 
Old 04-26-04, 06:07 PM   #13
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A'right Im Going To Have To Give This Shit To 'Mc' No Doubt' .. But DAMN Fix Your Structure - - - Damn You Were All Over The Place' ...!! Witch Threw Your Verse Off Balance' ..!! Both Verses Could Have Been Improved' ..!!' ... And Both Could Evelate!' .. Anyways' ...


Mc Got This Shit' !!....


Return The Favor!!!!

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Old 04-26-04, 07:29 PM   #14
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Vote up please people...ill vote on ur battle if u want also
 
Old 04-26-04, 10:24 PM   #15
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Alright, I don't talk any "shit", I'm just being honest, I don't care about winning, so stop acting childish and I'll stop treating you like one.

And to the people who voted for me, I appreciate it, I would vote for you guys but I don't have enough battles won nor enough posts to do that yet.
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