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I can tell ya flows acidic, its disintegrated ya wins/
You said you was gona lose, oh look you gon done it again/
I need no paper nor a pen this shits keystyle my little losin friend/
I've had my share of losin, you seem to enjoy it so give yaself another 10/
Hand ya ass to ya on a plataur an serve it ya for dinner/
Cos to me ur a beginner but maybe a quitter u'll leave this game a sinner/
Ya sig spits like you a preacher, a teacher of the lord/
The only thing people do to you is close the curtains an shut the door/
I spit this shit before I'm jus better than you, theres no doubt about it/
Don't fuck with me cos in the end you jus a half weight, half ass little dick/

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u thought u had the talent to come and beat me wit ya half ass lyrics//
thought u was a big man and so u dropped ur guard and yet no one could hear it//
sayin this is aint a game but ur verse is just childs play to me//
testin me to erupt is tha wrong choice but ima let u slide but ima leave u wit a burn in tha 3rd degree//
gettin another loss to add to ur record will come wit ease just let me release the venom in me//
now u will see how sic i can be cuz i can make tis GUY become a muff diVER but he wont be a survivor against tis god mc//
tha only thing tats a way of life for u is enden up on the recievin end of a decapitatin punch//
ur punches arent connectin cus ur lines r tied up so quit feedin me ur shit cuz i already had ur ass for lunch//
hes just a lightweight goin against a heavyweight but he cant hold the weight so just fall back and give up tryin to be a giant//
acceptin tis match up was tha worst mistake u made u shouldve been told but u would have been defiant//

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uppin for sum votes please dont sleep come on and vote a winner yall can do it

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67-30-46 combined overall on rb


keep lethal in thy beatin heart/
let thy tactix slip life falls apart/


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almost forgot

3-0 is a ko
first to five if no ko wins aite

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67-30-46 combined overall on rb


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The other guy punches were so so retarded Omg. Ac dawg man i have to say u killed em.

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this battle was ok but i think ac merked him punchlines were aight but this was ac catagory flow was ok too also ac catagory structure goes to g but overall i'll give this vote to ac u both could of eleveated keep at it u'll both get better

its 1-0 me come peeps vote and when u do, do it honestly cuz tats how tis should be dun

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guyver won. this was yet another sub par battle. man i don't know why i read these. his first few lines were ok, then down hill from there. they didn't really make much sense for the most part. second dude is there hope for you? your bars were way too long. you tried cramming too much information into one punch. it was like you had small little punches here, then you would throw in a random punch there. didn't keep consistent with the ideas you had. made it flow horrid. could have been better i think.

vote: guyver

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i think ac took this his punches were better i think guyver had alot of filler...guy also had some good punchlines but nothing interesting...same with ac nice punches but nothing really interesting..but his flow and worplday and punches took this battle for him nice shyt from both but my vote goes to ac

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im lookin for tha final vote but if u vote be honest and place it in tha polls

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huh? 3 vote KO?? ha ha ha.
U gotta be kiddin. Its 5 Vote KO. Jus like every other battle up in here.
I thought you said 10 lines. U got 20 dog! thats some out stretched shit. Ya sentences can't be as u want them. They're ONE LINE, with maybe a word or two over spill, once or twice in ya verse. NOT EVERY LINE!
This is some whack shit.

Uppin

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the vote

first acidic
u thought u had the talent to come and beat me wit ya half ass lyrics//
thought u was a big man and so u dropped ur guard and yet no one could hear it//
6
sayin this is aint a game but ur verse is just childs play to me//
testin me to erupt is tha wrong choice but ima let u slide but ima leave u wit a burn in tha 3rd degree//
7 where are the punches so far?
gettin another loss to add to ur record will come wit ease just let me release the venom in me//
now u will see how sic i can be cuz i can make tis GUY become a muff diVER but he wont be a survivor against tis god mc//
6 where is the punch...hello ...noone home?
tha only thing tats a way of life for u is enden up on the recievin end of a decapitatin punch//
ur punches arent connectin cus ur lines r tied up so quit feedin me ur shit cuz i already had ur ass for lunch//
7.5 sort of a punch...i guess, terrible flow
hes just a lightweight goin against a heavyweight but he cant hold the weight so just fall back and give up tryin to be a giant//
acceptin tis match up was tha worst mistake u made u shouldve been told but u would have been defiant//
5...one punch...in the whole battle...wtf



guyver...wow i hope you have some punches...cause i'm falling asleep

I can tell ya flows acidic, its disintegrated ya wins/
You said you was gona lose, oh look you gon done it again/
7.5 decent punch i guess...nice flow though
I need no paper nor a pen this shits keystyle my little losin friend/
I've had my share of losin, you seem to enjoy it so give yaself another 10/
6.5 clever...but not really a punch
Hand ya ass to ya on a plataur an serve it ya for dinner/
Cos to me ur a beginner but maybe a quitter u'll leave this game a sinner/
7 hmm...hmmm...
Ya sig spits like you a preacher, a teacher of the lord/
The only thing people do to you is close the curtains an shut the door/
8.5...boom haha like those fuckin mormons...that's tight...and original
I spit this shit before I'm jus better than you, theres no doubt about it/
Don't fuck with me cos in the end you jus a half weight, half ass little dick/
6.5 hmm boo

breakdown....
acidic....31.5/50
guyver....36/50

easily taken by guyver...because of better structure and although not alot of punches he did have more then 1.

pussy ass guyver, fuck! ure punches were weak man step ya shit up a level....desperatley...punches were whack dawg,,,,,Ac had sum nice flow and of course punches were so much betetr than 'gu'........Easy win....No contest.....

vote...AC

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