my rap flow's slow, with clarity and purity/
and its tighter than fort knox security/its just occured to me
all rap is is poetry/
from the street
set to a beat
so take a seat...
and marvel as my words flow like water
i think you outta
get a thesaurus and find the source of my rawness
no need to bore us - ill define my skills
im a cross between vodka and 3 bottles of pills.
but still u wanna question my rap credibility?
guilty for agility, capability and reality.
hear me - my mind's hazin
im pagein agein caucasions and they find my phrasin amazin.
i leave em gazin at the pavement in amazement whilst i steal their shoelaces and hang myself in their basement.
i got work placement as a spaceman and fucked up -
i went to mars but came back because i got a headrush.
dont think i'l blow up and be a gangsta g tho
lyrical equivalent of joseph and his dreamcoat
ladies im ur dreamboat - the perfect man
but il never be seen without a pen in ma hand...
to write rhymes that'll make me blow up
il never grow up
till i can show up all the rappers who make me wanna throw up...
blazin squad - en skinny pricks from down south
when they spit its shit comin out their damn mouth.
but im not gonna linger on who i despise
for that i wear a disguise
buy a gun and say my goodbyes
il rise to the occasion witha verbal invasion
fuck bullets - il shoot words at the equation

so now im angry ppl so dont push me
cos il beat u, chop u up and eat u like a pussy.


so there u have it folks!!! mr. skam reppin the FD fundamentals crew!!!

big up stag!goes!jist!epha!phew!kper!

leeds, england

that was a nice spit, you have some mad potential, i'd give you an 8/10 on that one

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yo that was some tite shit homie it reminded me of earlier eminem like around that SLIM SHADY LP era with that spontanious juss outta kno where rhymes. i happen to be a big eminem fan and it was tite.

holla back at mine
I AM THE AMERICAN DREAM
BLOOD, SWEAT, and TEARS

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ayo fam that was pretty hott nice wordplay and mulites good drop

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RV's Only 3 Time Topical Tourney Champion

I agree..this sounded to me like earlier Eminem also. I like your style..like you how you easily and smoothly switch from one subject to another. Its very interesting, and shows you have skills as a lyricist.

The flow was directly on point, kind of a laid back type flow..reminded me of a Snoop type shit or Mos Def maybe.

There were some lines that were particularly dope:

"Tighter than Fort Knox security"
^^That was creative/Funny

The only thing I didn't like was parts of it didn't quite seem to rhyme right. I don't know, maybe you are British or just have an accent different from mine, so if that is the case, don't take offense.

The rest of it I liked.

Keep it up, homie.

Peace

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My lack of sanity brings agony, tragedy, and agony to anyone who battles me


"Don't fuck wit what you don't know"-2Pac

cheers lads. appreciate it

man that rhyme was tight. you got skills homie. u really from leeds?
yo keep it up u got talent homie

nice that was awsome

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Yo LIL RENEGADE is makin his way up da ranks.
ya boi is back

im not a pro rapper, im jus tryin this
im a combination of the sciences
attack u with appliances.
i spit so fast words get lost in my sinuses
next year you'll be buyin this
and cryin as i lyrically ply the piss.
whos style is this? people wanna steal it and bite it
even though they didnt write it
they wanna claim on my shit
i copywright my rhymes so noone can rip me
cos a pen to me is like a caravan to a gypsy.
i get tipsy off addrenalin
3 spoons of bennylin and a joint will getcha brain peddlin...


unfinished, but i like it. yeah im from leeds.

<---FuNdEmEnTaLs---> skam

cheers for the support ppl