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Ghetto Cripple 2 28.57%
Whiskey 5 71.43%
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Old 04-27-04, 06:03 PM   #1
Whiskey
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Ghetto Cripple Vs. Whiskey

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Aiight.

10-20 lines.
30 minutes.
I spit first.
Good luck, man.
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Old 04-27-04, 06:12 PM   #2
ghetto cripple
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forget my private message, lets do this, you spite first and that will be better, 30 minute is good
 
Old 04-27-04, 06:16 PM   #3
Whiskey
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Ayo.

The only thing about you that's bouncin' dawg, are your cheques.
You winnin' this is a distant dream, like da last time you had sex.
I'ma make you eat and fuckin' choke on your song's text.
A reflex... reaction to your shit. Gettin' me vexed.
You got all the time you need to pick the words you're gonna use.
Still you'll make this shit like 8-ball, you'll be missin' all your cues,
You're gonna lose, don't snooze, lyrically I will abuse,
I have issues with makin' bitches outta the fuckin' likes of you.
I'ma burn so hot I'll be congeling you're fuckin' flow.
You'll be askin' yourself later, "Where'd my punchlines go?"
I'm gonna make this shit a white-out, sixteen inches of fuckin' snow.
Ghetto cripple, you're out to lunch if you even think that you'll K.O.
I'ma a slice you up and send you home in multiple packages.
Just for fun I'll lable each one with a fresh insulting adjective.
Here's your severed hand wrapped up in bloody bandages.
You can't grip the mic now! You see my fuckin' happiness?
I'll let you get to spittin' now, sit back and watch you blurt it
and stumble through each and every bar like you're uncertain.
Look at you. Steppin' up to the mic like it's worth it.
Like Street Fighter 2, I'm gonna end this bitch Perfect.

Gl. Pz.
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Old 05-15-04, 02:33 PM   #4
Know-Gimix
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The only thing about you that's bouncin' dawg, are your cheques.
You winnin' this is a distant dream, like da last time you had sex.
kinda weak but it has a punch

I'ma make you eat and fuckin' choke on your song's text.
A reflex... reaction to your shit. Gettin' me vexed.
Flows hot- needs a punchline
You got all the time you need to pick the words you're gonna use.
Still you'll make this shit like 8-ball, you'll be missin' all your cues,
iight
You're gonna lose, don't snooze, lyrically I will abuse,
I have issues with makin' bitches outta the fuckin' likes of you.
super hot flow
I'ma burn so hot I'll be congeling you're fuckin' flow.
You'll be askin' yourself later, "Where'd my punchlines go?"
not bad
I'm gonna make this shit a white-out, sixteen inches of fuckin' snow.
Ghetto cripple, you're out to lunch if you even think that you'll K.O.
I think a different choice of words would have made this punch snap

I'ma a slice you up and send you home in multiple packages.
Just for fun I'll lable each one with a fresh insulting adjective.
Here's your severed hand wrapped up in bloody bandages.
You can't grip the mic now! You see my fuckin' happiness?
I'll let you get to spittin' now, sit back and watch you blurt it
and stumble through each and every bar like you're uncertain.
Look at you. Steppin' up to the mic like it's worth it.
Like Street Fighter 2, I'm gonna end this bitch Perfect.
This is what won the battle- 4 bars of nice punches, excellent flow, a multi or two-- very nice.- Vote Whiskey

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Old 04-27-04, 06:26 PM   #5
ghetto cripple
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scratches, thats all your leavin' me with, im'a hit you with classics///
cause whats betta than kid spittin battery acid//
you wanna battle me you gonna get smashed kid//
you need the luck of the irish and black magic///
shit look who you battlin' against///
ghetto cripple just ran over a faggot bitch//

you wanna battle me//
i bleed with raw beef//
i dont need mosses to split the seas//
you try to out spit me//
might as well kiss my feet//
bow down to the cripple majesty//
you battlin' a god , you spit blasphemy//

you battlin' me a seed of the x-generation//
you see 20 20 but hell i got x-ray vision///

another hard diss from me but always havin respect, thanks for the battle.
 
Old 04-27-04, 06:48 PM   #6
Whiskey
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yo, good battle man.

uppin for votes. drop a vote here and if i think i know what i'm talkin' about i'll hit you back (like it says in the sig ) pz.
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Old 04-27-04, 06:55 PM   #7
ghetto cripple
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thanks yo, uuuuuuuuuuuuupppppppppppppiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnn fo votes
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killuminatic K.O.
Big Woody K.O.
Da Solution 5-1
Big Woody 5-2

LOSSES
killuminatic K.O.
Da Jokah K.O.
Whiskey 5-2
dawgfatha_13 5-3

 
Old 04-27-04, 07:05 PM   #8
quickpunch
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yo i'll vote on this on my moms life if yall vote on this honestly and explain UR VOTES U HAVE TO EXPLAIN UR VOTES VERY DETAILED A LIL

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Old 04-27-04, 11:46 PM   #9
Whiskey
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uppin' for votes y'all. uppin... uppin... uppin...
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Old 04-28-04, 01:27 PM   #10
Whiskey
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uppin' for votes y'all. uppin... uppin... uppin...
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Vs. More L Come on!!
Vs. lone1
Vs. demobx
Vs. Ghetto Cripple
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Old 04-28-04, 08:50 PM   #11
ghetto cripple
bringin' new thoughts to the name disability-flossed in tight wear shiny shoes you feelin' me
 
Posts: 198
From: P-town
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uuuuuuuuuuuuuuppppppppppppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiinn nnnnnnn fo votes
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Battle's

openmic

WINS
killuminatic K.O.
Big Woody K.O.
Da Solution 5-1
Big Woody 5-2

LOSSES
killuminatic K.O.
Da Jokah K.O.
Whiskey 5-2
dawgfatha_13 5-3

 
Old 04-28-04, 09:01 PM   #12
K-Trin
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okay very weak battle.Ghetto,ur flow was badly off.And ur punches were very weak.U need elevating.Your lines were very simple as well.Whisky,ur's was not all that good either.But stiil better than ghetto.
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Old 04-29-04, 11:32 AM   #13
ghetto cripple
bringin' new thoughts to the name disability-flossed in tight wear shiny shoes you feelin' me
 
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uuuuuuuuuuuuppppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnn for votes
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openmic

WINS
killuminatic K.O.
Big Woody K.O.
Da Solution 5-1
Big Woody 5-2

LOSSES
killuminatic K.O.
Da Jokah K.O.
Whiskey 5-2
dawgfatha_13 5-3

 
Old 04-29-04, 11:42 AM   #14
King Solo
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this was a weak battle
whiskey u had aight structure and flow where as ghetto ures was way off in this battle. however ure punuches i thought were slightly better than whiskeys and i thought that whiskey tried to hard and dragged his shit out too much
short and sweet equals ure opponents defeat...lmfao

Vote - ghetto

return tha favour playas
my links are in my sig.
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Old 04-29-04, 11:43 AM   #15
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and make sure ure votes are a little explained
none of this

"OH yeah i vote for him cuz his spit was sick!"
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