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Old 04-28-04, 12:55 PM   #1
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ROUND 3....Im going first to murk this faggot...........once and for alll.....................................
no d-r, hate, crew votes....
let the best man win...peace
check in and you got one hour to drop ya verse......

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Old 04-28-04, 12:56 PM   #2
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not checking in yet....i got 40 min...to class and gotta work so ill drop after i get home.............................................. .......
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Old 04-28-04, 05:26 PM   #3
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check check check............................................. ....
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Old 04-28-04, 06:24 PM   #4
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Check our last battle, he was whining, “why can’t I have-it-my-way!”
You wouldn’t get love from me even if it was a queer Valentine’s-day//1

If your verses wore thongs like girls on “Virginia” beaches//
You wouldn’t be as tight, so I’ll keep the last battle a secret (http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121006)

You don’t wanna see me actually battle rap cause I’ll destroy you like broken Cadillacs//
Maybe if you weren’t such a bitch, a loss, I might have gotten you out-of-that//3

I study that’s why I couldn’t reply back, while you in the south getting a wack-education//
LyricalMethod should never rap, he’s giving the dirty south a bad-reputation//4

When I drop a verse, I’m testing your fifth sense cause I know you can “sense-me”//
You wouldn’t win even if you got four dick riders to vote against-me (I’ll KO him again)//5

I’ll make you “capture the feeling” of loss like Kodak moments//
You will never win, put you in the “past” so you can hear a “throw-back” omen//6

Go-and-hide cause I’m about to cut you up into shreds like I rolled-with-knives//
I ain’t on your level? Well than who’s the one that’s O-and-five?//7

The only way you’d ever win is if we flipped-scripts so you should skip-this//
You a disgrace to dirty south rap, you on Luda, Lil’Flip, and David Banner’s hit-list//8

After this you will be like mad pen pals, you won’t write-me-back//
You like Mike Tyson, I KOed you, and you wanna fight-me-back//9
Go back to the sticks cause you a disgrace rap//

Never reply back and “holla”, so I hope you burn hell so you won’t say “hell-low”//
This cat will never win, he about to go on the biggest record loss worse than Steclo’s (check business section of the papers)//10
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Old 04-29-04, 11:48 AM   #5
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okay nice verse pussy................. we will see about that KO dun
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Old 04-30-04, 08:27 AM   #6
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while im in the "South" getting a "wack education" yo lame ass in the Notrh ice skating.i ain't hatin, bit you act like we was datin, my lyrics fuck you up like Freedy did Jason/1

dude please stop hatin, you probably looking at a ELton JOns concert in your room masturbating. i got rythumic tendencies to turn my enimies to verbal "synonyms" i hear your mom in the backround screaming "please sto killing him./2

but i won't this is it. i gotta win, you wouldn't have proper support evn if depends sponsored you. dude you don't have a clue that when i speak my verbal tornado swallows, my words pierce your mind like hallows run through stupid fools like you/3

and you might be good, but you from "Canada" bitch, YOU DON'T REP A HOOD". im from the gritty streets of Richmond, i though you would give respect to a better emcee, but i guess you think you as nice as me./4

you couldn't feel ah beat even if yo heart was knocked out, you trying to get a win but yo mind just clocked out. its ove, im poison in your system like the venom of a cobra. my rhymes kill off your air supply like AL Roker wearing a choker./5

beating me is hard to do like heating things up with a pop sickle. im poking at you gangsta like a cold nipple. and you couldn't get a wave even if was a ripple. it simple we both share somethign in common, we both wanna win but there lies the problem. i got the lyrics to solve em' but like rocks in a glass its impossible to dissolve them./6

i had to wait a long time for you to copy in paste. im a verbal bulldozer, i just clear soace. i don;t wait to drop my verses i lay niggas down in hearses. fuck your verses, you the worse emcee i had to deal with. you like a unwelcomed guess i just can't chill with./7

you compare me to mike tyson but i'll k.o. your ass quicker then M-Byson (character on street fighter), it intisign cuz imma keep writtin, like Rocky imma keep fighting. like a wounded dog imma keep biting till i rise to the top like Christ/8

soon imma elavate cuz i spit bars so hard that i crack the sky and then i'll talk to god. even if you were a baot you wouldn't get me drift. im santa clause and a loss to you is my gift. i don't bullshit when it comes to raps, iknow i got mad 0's like apple jacks. but a heart of a champion is what you lack. Tell me what has Canada contributed to rap. AS a matterof fact after this i'll put yall on the map. instantly your computer screen goes black. its a rap everybody knows i got you stuck in venus fly trap./9

i ain't hard i just spit for the streets. even if you could palm fire you couldn't catch heat. and you don't want beef i got young gunnas like Cris and lil neef. your lyrics flatter than a soda wit no suds. from me you gets no love, i fit in this game tight like Garry Patton the glove./10
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Old 04-30-04, 03:22 PM   #7
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i believe that he didnt prewrite but just take a look at the last post, and this one really really good...it took u 3 days but im not hating...much respect nice drop
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Old 04-30-04, 10:20 PM   #8
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ok check it

mike your opener was ummm on the gay side made you say yourself was gay an shit wtf??? closer was nicely worded good punch and personal nice shit anr threw the rest of the verse you stayed pretty consistent nice punchs and good personals and it flowed pretty well even with bars kinda stretched overall good drop like you wanted this one

method your opener was assed out lines way to far stretched and the punch didnt even connect the closer was like 4 lines wtf you posted like 4 to his 1 line come on now aan its all bunched up hard to read kindaliketypinlikethis << hard to read aint it
you need to work on your structure an line count

vote mike
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Old 04-30-04, 10:34 PM   #9
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yo mike your stuff was good seen you do better but you did better than him
your stff made sense to begin with and you had more creativity.


method

you stuff sucked it didnt make sense either .your punches were weak and everything
flow was messed up like you was just grabbing things from other rhymes and putting it all together.

v=mike
 
Old 04-30-04, 11:54 PM   #10
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break down for mike :
kept his battle flowing all the way
he use good multies and i think that won him the battle
overall 8/10
(also ahd good punches)
breakdown for lyrical method
your shit was long bad flow and boring
your punches wre fair but u used the same word in 3 sentences 3 times not good
so my vote goes to mik12
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Old 05-01-04, 09:08 AM   #11
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Check our last battle, he was whining, “why can’t I have-it-my-way!”
You wouldn’t get love from me even if it was a queer Valentine’s-day//1
lmao second part is dope nice punch
If your verses wore thongs like girls on “Virginia” beaches//
You wouldn’t be as tight, so I’ll keep the last battle a secret (http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121006)
lol decent punch nice personal
You don’t wanna see me actually battle rap cause I’ll destroy you like broken Cadillacs//
Maybe if you weren’t such a bitch, a loss, I might have gotten you out-of-that//3
first part is dope but dont understand second part
I study that’s why I couldn’t reply back, while you in the south getting a wack-education//
LyricalMethod should never rap, he’s giving the dirty south a bad-reputation//4
lol nice punch
When I drop a verse, I’m testing your fifth sense cause I know you can “sense-me”//
You wouldn’t win even if you got four dick riders to vote against-me (I’ll KO him again)//5
lmfao second part is dope nice punch
I’ll make you “capture the feeling” of loss like Kodak moments//
You will never win, put you in the “past” so you can hear a “throw-back” omen//6
first part is nice decent
Go-and-hide cause I’m about to cut you up into shreds like I rolled-with-knives//
I ain’t on your level? Well than who’s the one that’s O-and-five?//7
nice personal (second part)
The only way you’d ever win is if we flipped-scripts so you should skip-this//
You a disgrace to dirty south rap, you on Luda, Lil’Flip, and David Banner’s hit-list//8
nice wordplay
After this you will be like mad pen pals, you won’t write-me-back//
You like Mike Tyson, I KOed you, and you wanna fight-me-back//9
Go back to the sticks cause you a disgrace rap//
lil stretched but decent punch
Never reply back and “holla”, so I hope you burn hell so you won’t say “hell-low”//
This cat will never win, he about to go on the biggest record loss worse than Steclo’s (check business section of the papers)//10
decent closer



while im in the "South" getting a "wack education" yo lame ass in the Notrh ice skating.i ain't hatin, bit you act like we was datin, my lyrics fuck you up like Freedy did Jason/1
second part is decent
dude please stop hatin, you probably looking at a ELton JOns concert in your room masturbating. i got rythumic tendencies to turn my enimies to verbal "synonyms" i hear your mom in the backround screaming "please sto killing him./2
stretched but decent
but i won't this is it. i gotta win, you wouldn't have proper support evn if depends sponsored you. dude you don't have a clue that when i speak my verbal tornado swallows, my words pierce your mind like hallows run through stupid fools like you/3
nice rhyme scheme
and you might be good, but you from "Canada" bitch, YOU DON'T REP A HOOD". im from the gritty streets of Richmond, i though you would give respect to a better emcee, but i guess you think you as nice as me./4
so so punch coulda been flipped better
you couldn't feel ah beat even if yo heart was knocked out, you trying to get a win but yo mind just clocked out. its ove, im poison in your system like the venom of a cobra. my rhymes kill off your air supply like AL Roker wearing a choker./5
last part is nice
beating me is hard to do like heating things up with a pop sickle. im poking at you gangsta like a cold nipple. and you couldn't get a wave even if was a ripple. it simple we both share somethign in common, we both wanna win but there lies the problem. i got the lyrics to solve em' but like rocks in a glass its impossible to dissolve them./6
decent punch
i had to wait a long time for you to copy in paste. im a verbal bulldozer, i just clear soace. i don;t wait to drop my verses i lay niggas down in hearses. fuck your verses, you the worse emcee i had to deal with. you like a unwelcomed guess i just can't chill with./7
so so punch again
you compare me to mike tyson but i'll k.o. your ass quicker then M-Byson (character on street fighter), it intisign cuz imma keep writtin, like Rocky imma keep fighting. like a wounded dog imma keep biting till i rise to the top like Christ/8
lmao nice
soon imma elavate cuz i spit bars so hard that i crack the sky and then i'll talk to god. even if you were a baot you wouldn't get me drift. im santa clause and a loss to you is my gift. i don't bullshit when it comes to raps, iknow i got mad 0's like apple jacks. but a heart of a champion is what you lack. Tell me what has Canada contributed to rap. AS a matterof fact after this i'll put yall on the map. instantly your computer screen goes black. its a rap everybody knows i got you stuck in venus fly trap./9
ssssssssttttttttrrrrrreeeetttccchhheeeddd but lmao at the punches nice
i ain't hard i just spit for the streets. even if you could palm fire you couldn't catch heat. and you don't want beef i got young gunnas like Cris and lil neef. your lyrics flatter than a soda wit no suds. from me you gets no love, i fit in this game tight like Garry Patton the glove./10
the payton line is dope nice closer

overall i gotta vote for mike peep one of mine when they go down
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Old 05-01-04, 10:56 AM   #12
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Pretty good rhymes..... I liked mikes rhyme more.... heres why

MIKE
He had good punches
Good personals
Good Wordplay
And It was overall good.

Lyrical Method
Your rhymes at too stretched... look at 9... its like a paragraph
Shorten ure rhymes up.. ill look and sound better.
Keep elevating...

Overall good battle... my vote goes to mike..
 
 


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