aiight epopels tellin me u good so lets go

10 lines
you spit first
no feeding
no d/r cv or dickring
good luck

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KiLlAh BwOy

check in..........................................

Yo from New York but yo flow ain't got shit on Jigga
Matter of fact you belong with them squad up Niggas

You know the cock sound that mean I'm bout to pop rounds
Look kid you wouldn't make it one block in Chi-Town

But off the city Im a BadBoy Like Diddy
Take yo work you a be losing weight like Missy

You couldn't move a Gram you more like the Kitchen Man
Spittin yo flow you takin a chance cause you couldn't even MAKE THE BAND

60-40 I'll whip you ass like Roy
Kill that noise for a fuck around Killa a boy

checkin da ma fuck IN..good luck dawg................

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KiLlAh BwOy

Rhymes'll devour Lost Child...I saw this kid yesterday on "Fags Gone Wild"...../
Leave you runnin' for miles Like puff daddy runnin' the marathon..Change ya style../
You Can't rap for shit dawg you just a follower...I run "Dee" Block LIke jadakiss.../
Kid found his name on da wackest emcees crew now he like YA I MADE THE LIST../
You missin' sum'n he like I NEED TO FIND MY FLOW..dawg give me my map back.../
This "child" carries pokemon cards I carry 2 straps like backpacks........./
You mus be jokin,Like Tom cruise..Gettin' in my crew is a "Mission Impossible"../
Like a man goin 300/mph with no breaks, My Rhymes are Unstoppable....../
Facin' da Bwoy? A loss is possible....You beatin' me? probablll.......-Y not....../
Dont piss me off' cause the world will come to an end like George Bush on Pot.../


LOL its like dat ma fucka....lets go beat dat son

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KiLlAh BwOy

Good Battle Uppin for votes.......................

dis battle was a good 1 i liked both of yo verses check it

lost-u had some ok punches some tite strucutre and ite vocab
nice flow

bestline-Yo from New York but yo flow ain't got shit on Jigga
Matter of fact you belong with them squad up Niggas

start off was good

worsteline-60-40 I'll whip you ass like Roy
Kill that noise for a fuck around Killa a boy

couldve been betta

overall nice drop yo verse was good i give it a **8.5**

killa-u also had a nice flow and KILLA punches

bestline-Rhymes'll devour Lost Child...I saw this kid yesterday on "Fags Gone Wild"...../
Leave you runnin' for miles Like puff daddy runnin' the marathon..Change ya style../

^^ descent start

worsteline-none

overall it was tite u didnt have a worsteline so i give u a **9**

winner killa

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thanx oh and that p diddy line wen i said change ya style did u see his hair style lmfao a fuckin' mo hawk...heyllllllll nawww

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KiLlAh BwOy

Is my verse good enough to get in killa...................

this was an aiight battle..Lost Child spent more time talkin bout himself and Chicago than actually battling...Y
"you couldn't move a Gram you more like the Kitchen Man
Spittin yo flow you takin a chance cause you couldn't even MAKE THE BAND"

that was ya only good line....u have some elevating to do....but I have seen much worse...I give you a 5/10

Killah...I have been lookin at a lotta ya battloes....you're inconsistent.....you hot one second then whack tha next....u won this battle but u still kinda sucked...U can do better....what happened to tha flow u had when u battled me?

Man come harder next time...
You Can't rap for shit dawg you just a follower...I run "Dee" Block LIke jadakiss.../
Kid found his name on da wackest emcees crew now he like YA I MADE THE LIST../
that was your best line...and it still sucked.... but u battlin a nigga that hasnt found his style yet.....u get a 6/10

Lc-

Yo from New York but yo flow ain't got shit on Jigga
Matter of fact you belong with them squad up Niggas

^^played but creative 7/10

Killa-

Rhymes'll devour Lost Child...I saw this kid yesterday on "Fags Gone Wild"...../
Leave you runnin' for miles Like puff daddy runnin' the marathon..Change ya style../

^^nice ...am feelin it 8/10

V/Killa

He killed Lost with betta punches.

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http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...t=120970&page=3

I forgat return the fav and vote honest. Thanks

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The BreakdowWWwWnn................

Killah has this battle hands down from punches to flow it was all hott
18/20

Lostchild you had a couple good lines but nothing that could hit hard enough to take out killahs punches. (Work on structure)
9/20

ayy i voted on yallz battle now please return the fava heres the link
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121076

Yo from New York but yo flow ain't got shit on Jigga
Matter of fact you belong with them squad up Niggas
ok, ok
You know the cock sound that mean I'm bout to pop rounds
Look kid you wouldn't make it one block in Chi-Town
not so ok
But off the city Im a BadBoy Like Diddy
Take yo work you a be losing weight like Missy
um.. no.
You couldn't move a Gram you more like the Kitchen Man
Spittin yo flow you takin a chance cause you couldn't even MAKE THE BAND
eh...
60-40 I'll whip you ass like Roy
Kill that noise for a fuck around Killa a boy
um... no.

your structure was messed up, your punches were kinda weak, you lacked any great personal.


Rhymes'll devour Lost Child...I saw this kid yesterday on "Fags Gone Wild"...../
Leave you runnin' for miles Like puff daddy runnin' the marathon..Change ya style../
ok.. ok.. not great..
You Can't rap for shit dawg you just a follower...I run "Dee" Block LIke jadakiss.../
Kid found his name on da wackest emcees crew now he like YA I MADE THE LIST../
still stretched out, but the punch made me smile. good use of humor
You missin' sum'n he like I NEED TO FIND MY FLOW..dawg give me my map back.../
This "child" carries pokemon cards I carry 2 straps like backpacks........./
yeah... not so much
You mus be jokin,Like Tom cruise..Gettin' in my crew is a "Mission Impossible"../
Like a man goin 300/mph with no breaks, My Rhymes are Unstoppable....../
ok, ok. could have done better with that first line as a lead in.. the second line wasn't a punch.
Facin' da Bwoy? A loss is possible....You beatin' me? probablll.......-Y not....../
Dont piss me off' cause the world will come to an end like George Bush on Pot.../
i like the hesitation.. the closer ain't great though.. but decent i guess

ok.. your verse had punches at least pretty consistently.. still gotta work on stringing two lines together to make one punch.. work on getting more personal punches in there, but you had this easily.

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RIP SMOKAJOKA WE WILL MiSS YOU!!!!!!