10-15 lines.
No hate,crew.DR,votes
I'll spit first

BonaFide,you call me rhymes whack?...well I'm a just tell you..you UNDER ATTACK!!/
My shit is so fuckin good.........it be bitted worldwide and far wide/
While ur gonna be set aside and be more ignored than a honey guide/
Which,to you,is nothing out of ordinary,cause u more like than "Little House on Praire"/
Reading my lines is like eating a wild cherry,it so fuckin good.....it's scary/
I'll kick you so hard in ur balls,it goes up and you really "CHOKE ON THESE NUTS"/
Then you get called STrini o'nuts........and you get forced to eat dogshit/
And you from Trinidad?...the home of kidnappning and dirty beaches/
U be thinking you got skil,just cause you feed of skillful raps,like a fuckin leech/
See I'm 14 and you 20,but I still got better shit than u...so FUCK OFF/
Cause shady'll chop you up right now...and feed you to my dog ...like puppy chow/
So now I'm done,and everybody,including you.......gonna take a bow/
And when niggas read this,they gon be like "OH FUCKIN GOD,STRINI LOST"/

yo yu got this dog

^^thanz man.You got any battles.Leave a link,I'll return tha favor.

where is this trini boy?

This fuckin faggot!!!!!!!!!!!!Bitch ass is a no show.

I'm not a no show biatch...here goes

Ya model ya self after Shady since your winning chances are slim...
and when your lines ran out you couldn't even rap about Kim//
ya wanna critique niggas sh*t...who told u to speak...
but then "those who CAN... RAP and those who CAN'T... CRITIQUE"//
don't be quick to dis Trinidad son...treat her like a lady
cause you was born 9 months after March and thus a "Carnival baby"//
I slide snide syllables packed with cyanide... from where I abide...
and you smile at the camera and open it, gettin blown far and wide, 'coyote' style//
(as in road-runner and coyote for the slow)
I 'elevate' you with uppercuts, lobbing u longer than... an elephant's nuts//
bust your bubble with that knock and drop kick the battle while your both lungs pop//
normally when you're startin an RPG punk....u level up first...
but u have high hopes....like hittin Britney...huh Fred Durst//
and leh me see...
your vocab is the worst with outburst like its your second language//
my bars amputated your arms but you wanna punch and do damage//
I'm as slick as Spiderman... but you wanna do 'carnage'//
with a punk ass profile, like you're a troll and this is Lineage//
so moral: reflect on what you've learnt now that you've been burnt like toast...
you have puberty to look foward too...don't risk your life on a boast//

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yo check it
this was a weak battle


bonafide your shit flowed not all tha time but it was o.k
u used a nice vocab and your personals and punches were nice
your opener was decent and your closer was alright

Shady you had this one dogg
you had a nice flow- vocab was there-shit didnt always flow but neither did
fide's-your opener was dencent but closer was kinda whack
liked some your punches and personals dogg

vote=Shady

drop an honest vote on this
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121759

This is like one of my worst spits and I'm sure I will still beat you

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ok check it

strini got this shit shady your lines are way to stretched you need to work on your structure and shorti nyour lines an that shti will help all off your flow an bring out your punchs instead of reading them 3 times to find it an strini you had nice wordplay and some good and bad punchs but it flowed well even though soem of your lines were stretched to just work on less filler and bringin hard punchs consistently

vote strini

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strini-Had hard punches....Nice structure....nice complexity
Nice vocab..nice similies..Cool metaphores....Very easy
too read....Nice battle Everything was atleast good 8/10

Shady-Weaker punches...Structure..Was good,Work
on similies a lil more aight...Also metaphores
Also yours wasnt to complexy and
not hard to read...Easy and understandable 6/10

v/Strini he had strong punches
Can you return the favor against true...He had soem d/rs but you know I got him right..Hit upp that battle aight...you good and nice battle http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121654

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More votes ppl...need more votes...no dr though...

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Yo my votes goes to Strini heres y

Strini- your verses flowed way better together than Shadys. You had some meta's and you also had some coo punchlines.. I liked the way you got on his Rapper too.
You had pretty good vocab could work on ur personals and adding more metas but other than that good job.

Shady- was feelin ur a verse a lil in the beginning but near the end structure and everything fell off. you went from doing 2 line rhymes to 1 which made it really hard to read. you didnt really through no hard punches but i can c u threw in soem personals though. So all i gotta say is elevate ur vocab throw in more metas and harder hittin punches.

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shady....fix ya structure....werk on not stretchin lines...it fucks up ya flow.....keep werkin on personals.....punches u really need to focus on.....jus elevate....use meta's too cuz they help ur creativity and punches.....up ur vocab cuz elementary style dont get u anywhere.....

strini......first off keep elevatin ur punches...u had betta ones than shady......use more meta's.....werk on multi's....ya flow was sick.....good structure....u had the better verse....

Vote - strini

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