im bk dogg ive bin gone 4 a while/
i had 2 improve my game u kno touch up my style/
cause now i realize i was crap now im alrite/
but a couple months on this site ill be king of da mic/
cause i seem 2 improve rap after rap rhyme after rhyme/
too reach my level yall got a mountain 2 climb/
im spineless ruthless yall aint in my league/
im cocky now so wait untill im makin da cheese/
this is a freestyle words straight from the top of my dome/
u kno the feeling ur minds dark ur in a new zone/
now studied my style read this rap over sum more/
tell me wat i got to do to get my shit in the store/
so hola wa blow and holla back/
slimmey's here, the games met its match/

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I kno u niggaz r second guessin da state i'm in,
Bitch i'm into making hit records dat spin like rims.

feedback plz

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I kno u niggaz r second guessin da state i'm in,
Bitch i'm into making hit records dat spin like rims.

y feedback dont rate it

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I kno u niggaz r second guessin da state i'm in,
Bitch i'm into making hit records dat spin like rims.

it was alright.
u could do better.

safe i kno it was jus a lil freestyle

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I kno u niggaz r second guessin da state i'm in,
Bitch i'm into making hit records dat spin like rims.

it was ight i meen not the best but ya it was ok