So now i see ya steppin out but yet you dont know the math
before you can be whole first fuckaz you surely need to be half
Simply check yourself before you seem to think that you tough
i fuck around and catch ya slippin.. son i'm callin your bluff
react with action not captions of you fake ass thuggs
when im done i show ya love put ya lights out with sluggs
Stay true to who you be man ..theres just no need to be fake
it just dont seem hold up.. when you facin the court case
get 5-10 on someshit you was thinkin while daydreamin
now they seein fresh fish for your ass dog they feenin
you aint dirty ya heard me you cant be.. ya washed up
for certain its curtains man it aint workin your time is up
ide smack ya in the ass and watch your fuckin brains fall out
while you smile thru shit piles that been layed in your mouth

Now bars surrounded cars impounded soul searchin god found em
its astounding blazin boundries people hounding horns sounding
"what the fuck im hear for"
heard you screamin it loudly
you seein demons form around you pledge alegiances proudly
all of a sudden there was silence from reactions of cowardly
displays and arrays of things you say disbeleif ..your hearts pounding
cant go away to any place grit your teeth and dont doubt it
then you see your end is near begins with loud shouting
how come the end was so clear.. appears to just be his plotting
now he dead from stupid shit unsaid buried and rotting


Hazy crazy slim shady wannabee see ya but maybe
gettin merked for no reason except that they bother me daily
hats backwards pants saggin actin like some gay ass pele
but all i hear from these fuckin queers is bitches screamin mayday
im about to set the record str8 to bad that your lame but hey
listen heed what i say strait dismay upon your face
your outta just place why did you come to this place
you see me comin start runnin i spot bitches... miles away
but this pretending brings the ending man dont throw it away
to anybody im offending disaster stikes in many ways
dawg ull soon be encased with cement and water from lakes
irrelevance no common sence it takes a man..to say
i was wrong but now you dead and gone faded awayyyyyyyyyyy

F Ee D B Ac K P Leas E

yo holla back man thats why we are here to grow and prosper from quality feedback

dat was pretty hot.

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The Definition. period.

ya that was koo

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Sick flows, for real. Sounds like you needed to get dat shit off your chest

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it was koo ill admit i was feeling it ........1

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hey yo im known to play it low//
dont confuse me with these cornballs on the radio//


ima true hustlah you couldnt fit in my shoes//
my pager buzz to much man my hips are bruised//

faMBa$e Bitch ass niggas Bean Town thats how im doing it....enjoy life make money.....death b4 dishonor
trust no body that aint your fam and fuck that you cant even trust them some times i cant even trust myself lil niggas.....1

yo i appreciate that feedback yall for real...............

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this wasnt all that great to be truthful
I mean, I was feeling what you was saying
but overall, this topic has been done countless times
and it could have been done better than what you was doing
all I can say is elevate dog, find some unplayed topics and then dropness
peace!

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R.I.P. Bodie

I liked it...it seemed emotional like u was trying to get a point across..but like ur multi's and metaphors could be better they seemed forced *one*

SB

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BATHING APE...(BAPE) FANATIC....

Good for you kryo nice to see your by yourself again son...........stay off my dick then

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it was ok...does anyone on this site know what multies are? cuz every rap ive seen so far only rhymes a single word...never two words put together.

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you bitches get a hystorectomy/
disrespectin-me/
you want to feel the full efect-of-me/
hand a tech-to-me