Ight my own little Anthem

Were the iLLest on the Block with the Mic Connection//
Spitten Vemon and leavin u with a Lyrical Infection//
Da Best and Da iLLest is what i see in our Reflection//
Ur crew rolls in Small Clubs we hit the Big Arenas//
Straight Cut Throat Killas is what were Seen-As//
1,2,3 Is the warnin we give for a Lyrical MeltDown//
We keep Bitch ass Crew's Flow's on LockDown//
Crews wantin the Respect we got DownTown//
Step to Da Army and Consider Urself the next Defeat//
Just are Deadly Presence makes ur Crew wanna Retreat//

Uppin opinions

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is it so bad no feedback

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i'm feelin your flow. Keep it comin

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sup dawg..

1--try droppin somethin longer next time...makes it more worth while to read


ok...

Flow was off because you rushed the lines

The rhyming was a tad basic too...try more internal rhyming

and multi-syllables


up imagery

jus elevate dawg

stay up

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