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05-05-04, 01:17 AM
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Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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this was the first pewice i ever wrote and im not that wack anymore lol
my dads a drugee he fuckin bugs me every day talkin about how he loves me $my dads a fuckin joke $ now that im older i understand y he's broke $ cause he buys so much coke $ sometimes i wish his throat would sweel up causin him 2 choke $ y would i snort coke when i could smoke weed $ 2 top it off he also does speed $ he says it gives him all the energy he needs $ fuck him he's a fagget and i ain't gonna have it $ i remember my mom sayin damnit it's been 2 days and he hasn't showed up yet $ i'd make dumb ass excuses like maybe he doesn't know how 2 drive in the wet $now that i'm older i'm not gonna let him bring me down like that $ sometimes i feel like smashin his face in with a bat $ 4 all the pain he caused me and my mom $ from that we learned how 2 be strong $i learned right from wrong my dads mistakes $ sometimes i wish he would sink 2 the bottom of the lake and never awake
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05-05-04, 05:56 AM
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I ain't even gonna say that this piece is wack because it's so deep. This rhyme sounds like it come from da heart...
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05-05-04, 08:35 AM
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thats deep it was tight but do us all a favor and type it in bars plz
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05-05-04, 10:10 AM
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IP:
yo it was the 1st thing i ever wrote so i didnt change anything
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05-05-04, 02:19 PM
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IP:
that shit man i was defently feeling that cuz of love when niggas draw there heart out in to there words and thoughts you feel me so defently i gotta say not only some hot shit but some real shit in at the same time
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hey yo im known to play it low// dont confuse me with these cornballs on the radio// ima true hustlah you couldnt fit in my shoes// my pager buzz to much man my hips are bruised// faMBa$e Bitch ass niggas Bean Town thats how im doing it....enjoy life make money.....death b4 dishonor trust no body that aint your fam and fuck that you cant even trust them some times i cant even trust myself lil niggas.....1 |
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05-05-04, 06:46 PM
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IP:
thanx
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05-05-04, 06:47 PM
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Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP:
uuuppppppppin leave ur feedback
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