Before i begin y'all need to know that everything I'm sayin bout certain people is true because i was present when certain things took place.

Gimme as much feedback as possible...

...I'm fully poised, clip fully loaded,
Fuck around wid me i'll leave fool's head exploded, i'm
Easily goaded, so don't tempt me, cos i'll
Break a motherfucker's nosebone in 3,
1,2,3,AND HE'S OUT STONECOLD,
I'm a royal flush,son, you might as well fold,
Yo, kid, my flow's deep...thought provokin,
You step to me?Cuz what you been smokin? I
Don't care what it is, gimme some of dat, no
Matter what it is, blud, I'll still knock you flat,
Don't chat, mind your biz, get out my face,
Watch yourself, fo real, blud, don't pass your place, you'd be
Worse than Vanilla Ice and da Spice Girls, if they
Got put inna mixin bowl n given a couple swirl,
Givin breed to a whole new level of wackness,
Yo, I'm just takin time to highlight your slackness,
Yeah, when i've battled i ain't bothered flowin ill,
Dats's because i know these chumps and they ain't real,
See Luminaz tried to battle me in school, so i
Showed da boy up n made him look like a fool, in
Front of like 20 peeps, ask him yourself, Killa
Poizen...da boy's dirtier than the top shelf,
Dis is da truth, i ain't tryin to be funny, has he
Told you bout da time he ate fox shit for money,
Dis was for like 3 pound, 60 pence, is it
Me or does it scream "LACK OF COMMON SENSE!!!"
Anyway, they talk S to da point of jarrin,
They may be battlin, but i'm light sparrin, you
See, i be givin y'all a little insight, as to
Why when i've battled, i've been far from tight, you
Know what, the day when their flows don't lag, I
...Swear to God I'll eat my du-rag

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