ok here we go
no crew votes
no dick rydin
no hate votes
no prewitten shit
no coming off the other persons shit
15-25 lines
lets get it crackin

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Ight dogg.. chekcin in.. we each have 30 mins to spit after checkin in..
also no bitina nd no feedin

DQ'ed and suspended for biting lines from:
http://rapdogs.com/message-board-fo...?t=6893&start=0
http://rapdogs.com/message-board-fo...p?p=84073#84073

can't wait ta hear this shyt

ok checked in
letts see what you got 30 minutes is fine for me
That 30 minutes after you go?

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ight here i go...o.. check it..


You still a 'baby' like you got a 'cake-wit-no-candles',
I’m 'quaking-this-battle', make you cry by 'takin yo rattle'.. (haha)
should've known not-to-come, I got this nigga duckin like I dropped-his-gun..
its lots-of-fun, like broken ankles Im bout to stop-ya-run..
When u vote u don't even read the verses..So just stop the con-kid, the whole site knows your on-dick..
A.K.A 'looking up to my bars' every single day like 'short convicts'..
like 'old war paintings' I’ll 'severe-ya-frame', mess wit me never-again,..
take yo forehead off so I can 'lever-ya-brain'..
Now this wangsta's a dork, forget the guns he holds..
Cause he's touchin nine's..ten's..and eleven year olds.. (u get it?)
enemy's are spell-bitten, my spits are too hot to hold-in like hells-mitten..
trust me, your flow couldn’’t be ‘water’ if it was ‘well-written'..
no crew can talk shit, or ill connect your head wit ur lip..
you couldn't have a tight flow if each 'bar' had it’s personal ‘Vice Grips’..
Lets be serious u couldnt touch me, nigga im not cross-eyed its plain to see..
You couldnt hit tight 'Keys' if u fucked 'Alicia' at the age of three..
Ight this nigga's 'A.K.A' Cuz hes Also Known As Shit..
U could heat up yo 'saliva' and still wouldnt have 'hot spits'..


yo go dogg..

ok check it
i'ma mixx this kid up so bad he gonna need a map//
yo dawg don't even try to battle you can rap//
believe that you ain't gonna make it to 6 and 0//
one bullet gonna bust you up from head to toe//
i don't even need to bite to win against mixx//
and i'ma break you in half like twixx//
the only reason why my raps is simple//
is cause i can pop you punks liike pimples//
and i don't need to go rawed off//
you mother fuckers and hard you just soft//
you dead and i still raid your tome like lara croft//
the only thing this mother fucker mixxes is soup//
i may be young but i still shot but not at a hoop//
A.K.A. was born to put this mother fucker in the ground//
you see the gun and you run and lose about 100 pound//
and that enough

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LOL.. u lack structure, wordplay, and connectin punches.. but its all good.. lets let the votes decide..

Uppin fo some votes.. dont sleep on this shit now ^^

V/mixx

To be honest it was 1 sided Mixx came real hard and the punches & personals really worked well together. Also Mixx had a decent structure capable to read. Nice spit.

A.K.A u did get walked over on this 1, i thought that ur lines were a lil too short on each verse and the structure did lack. Im pretty sure u could do better if u were given mo time but u werent.

1 sided like i said v/Mixx

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Vote: Mixx

This was pretty one-sided, A.K.A., juss keep elevatin' and uppin' ya complexity and punches in ya verses.....Mixx, there's still room for improvement, but in this battle.....you didn't need much......

You couldnt hit tight 'Keys' if u fucked 'Alicia' at the age of three.. <<<I found that line funny lol........


anyways Vote: Mixx

Uppin this shit for well explained vtes.. remember to vote in the poll too ^^