aight you know tha deal

10-15 lines

no crew
hate
or d/r votes

you spit first

lets get this started

yo check in so i know you gonna show......................

O Yea He Online// But Did U Ask Him Fo A Battle// Well I Dont Know But Its All Good// Yo Dawg Fatha Come On Nigga I Know U Aint No Punk!

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IAM BACK FUCKAH'Z HELL~! NEVA LOOKED SO GOOD

yeah dawgfatha accepted this in a PM..............

yo i aint dat good so go easy on me.lol

my raps are da be-all and end-all(best)//
rip off yo legs make ya unable to crawl//
im so intimidating i can make da realest gangstas bawl//
you one o' dem wanabees added to ma merk list//
you really dont scare me shakin yo skiiny lil fist//
been engineering dis shit fo da past decade//
leave ya wit no exit like a parkade blocade//
perforate yo ass wit my 9mm AK blade//
i aint here fo a masquerade//
i been around pimp and played//
in da street game i passed wit an a grade//
when ou stepped in hurr you thought you won//
but when i arrived you knew twas the end of your fun//
so go home and revise yo rhymes//
i knew i won before i dropped my lines//

theres my battle.remember,dis is a no beef battle

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The Definition. period.

aight yo im going to drop in like 15-20 mins

ya no problem.i just hope noone gon sleep on dis battle

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The Definition. period.

ayo ayo check it..............

your scared to face me-your weak watch tha plot unfold//
i'll have you running from tha "NET" with your hands up like soccer goals//
you spittin like one of them herb bitches new to tha site//
I could give you an uppercut an a jab- but i'll just give you a right//
i'll give him 4 votes-cuz for me to lose he's got to cheat/
you a gangsta huh-then why you runnin when u see me comin down your street/
Im not takin this kid Seriously-cuz he's a joke/
say you makin G's-but we all know that you broke/
yeah-you fags laugh- watch as im rippin others/
say you gettin pussy-but bitch it's probably your mothers/
you tripppin like Leprechauns without their gold/
plus your career is going nowhere-like immigrents without the their boats/

no beef dogg

thats 12 lines

that the shouldnt be in tha last line...o and uppin for some votes

my raps are da be-all and end-all(best)//
rip off yo legs make ya unable to crawl//
im so intimidating i can make da realest gangstas bawl//
you one o' dem wanabees added to ma merk list//
you really dont scare me shakin yo skiiny lil fist//

^^^^ decent flow/rhyming...it's comin off a tad too simple for me
punches are landing, just not that hard


your scared to face me-your weak watch tha plot unfold//
i'll have you running from tha "NET" with your hands up like soccer goals//
you spittin like one of them herb bitches new to tha site//
I could give you an uppercut an a jab- but i'll just give you a right//


^^^^ more complex...good punches/wordplay


Vote: Deleon...more complex verse..better wordplay


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alright now lets get some more votes in here.......

uppin............................................. .........................

uppin............................................. .for votes

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The Definition. period.

uppin................

Aight listen

ok to me this battle wasnt even clsoe even though dawgfatha has good flow his lyrical content is pretty basic... you need to be more creative and come with more complexity that is why deleon took this battle...

you tripppin like Leprechauns without their gold/
plus your career is going nowhere-like immigrents without the their boats/

^
Best line but still need work kid but you took this one by alot...

elevate

deleon wins

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