no dick riding
no crew votes
no prewitten
no hate votes
no beef
10-20 if you can handle it
spit sumtime today

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Checkin in, and Spittin!!

the name is D-Bate, and I'm reppin the Bank/
my lyrics take out more souljah's than a fuckin tank/
dont push me today, or you'll be feelin a shank/
keep runnin them lips, you ealkin the plank/
I dont got a grammy, so no need to thank/
my flow changin, like a ragin bull/
this thang is is bangin, and it started full/
No there is one last bullet, about time to Pullit/
dont gimme that bullshit, you fake ones just Pushit/
my lyrics are like bombs, blowin out in your face/
when I drop a verse, you cowards get put in your place/
tryin to step to the plate, with this Heavyweight/
somethin loose in your brain? are you fuckin insane.

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I messed up and put ealkin, instad of Walkin, sorry

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was that it? ha ok i gotta own you for think that was good//
the hearse ride next to you well you take one step in my hood//
The onle thing you can debate is wether you gonna get cermated or buried//
you better rush home cause your momma might be worried//
got people asking what happened? cause now i'm battling newbs//
this bitch is such a pussy that he might as well have boobs//
Bank vs Nextlevel. you got no chanch of winning//
killing dbate is against god. well i'm sinning//
just cause you got pac as an avatar doesn't mean you a thug//
and it you crew don't move all y'all asses get a slug//
only one cause i might have to use it on someone real//
before i'm over you already asking to cut a deal//

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chance in stead of chanch my bad i was typing too fast

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uppin for votes

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yeah dawg good battle uppin no beef either

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yeah it was a good battle, uppin again

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ummm d-bate.......i thought ur verse was very basic......u needa stop talkin about guns and bombs n shit.......thats what ur whole verse was about.........i can tell u're just starting out

aka

well neither verses were good......but,at least u didnt talk about guns.....u had a bit of personals....u used his avatar i guess......this was ur best line

The onle thing you can debate is wether you gonna get cermated or buried//

but nothin in this whole battle from either one of u stood out....but......i'll give it to aka.....cuz he aint rappin bout guns n cuz of the lil bit of personals

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what the hell is that. you don't like someone cause the talk about guns? ha. oh are you a trans with that pic shit? no beef of course and thats for the vote.

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^^lol
she IS transexual

anyway AKA got this
he had an overall better verse
and thats all I can say about it
sorry
this battle was so weak its hard to break it all down peice by peice and saying its all wack
but
v/AKA

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123431
hit that up

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the name is D-Bate, and I'm reppin the Bank/
my lyrics take out more souljah's than a fuckin tank/


^^ WACK

my lyrics are like bombs, blowin out in your face/
when I drop a verse, you cowards get put in your place/
tryin to step to the plate, with this Heavyweight/
somethin loose in your brain? are you fuckin insane.

^^ ur ramblin off at the mouth and this isn't making sense...how is this a diss to him?

was that it? ha ok i gotta own you for think that was good//
the hearse ride next to you well you take one step in my hood//
^^^ decent opener
just cause you got pac as an avatar doesn't mean you a thug//
and it you crew don't move all y'all asses get a slug//
only one cause i might have to use it on someone real//
before i'm over you already asking to cut a deal//

^^ haha...nice personal and decent closer

Vote: AKA...punches actually landed...verse more focused...made more sense

Debate you put it down,but your shit was more like a freestyle instead of a battle son you had no punches to knock aka out the box,but keep it movin kidd

AKA pucnches and metas was ight but you was holdin back it seemed but you took this one,,,but both verses were not that great

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D-bate you had some whack ass lyrics. YA need to elevate. Aiight punches and aiight flow tho.

Aka had some personals which helped. He also landed mor epunches.

Vote-aka

Return da favor
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124097

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