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You think you sexy , yet you got a dad that look like Paul Bearer//
You call urself Terror , cause to your parents , you nutin but an error//
U not a rapper...that pre-written shit shouldn't even be called a verse//
Nigga , you more manly than a nurse........ or wearing a purse //
Go look in the mirror and ask yourself "WHY DO I RAP ????? " //
Cause you having sex with a girl as hard as u can...feel like a love tap//
And you be walking around like you just been taking-it-in-the-chin//
Cause your dad fucked you more than Anjellina Jolie in Original Sin//
And you stroll round here thinking you good and you deserve props!!//
And you be thinking I suck? .. but you forget that's you and ur pops//
You more liked....... than a cockroach or Micheal Jackson tattoo //
When niggas hear the name TERROR ,they gonna be like WHO!!??!?!//

Ight

Your Come at me with that B/S ur just a Hot-Shot//
Kid ur Rhymes are Unbalanced like a Teator-Tot//
Your a Shady Worshiper,Hes your Life Long Rap Idol//
But u aint got his skill so Rookie of the Year isnt ur Title//
You changed ur name hopin u could escape ur Losing Slump//
Im leavin Craters on u,Ur Rhymes dont evan make a Bump//
Ill Rip-Out-Ur-Heart leavin u Without a Blood Flow//
I just took ur Only Flow,killen u will put me on Death Row//
Little Marshall Your Dreams have just Been Shattered//
Well like ur Freestyles i left u on the Mic Ripped & Tattered//
This goes to show whos best Rookie Cause u just got Batterd//

How bout ur shit MR.Rookie of the Year?

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And I am Rookie of the year.

Ight uppin lol no ur not

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ight uppin lol yes I am

Terror - Good spit man, had some good flow there.. and your punches were hott to.

Best Line - Your Come at me with that B/S ur just a Hot-Shot//
Kid ur Rhymes are Unbalanced like a Teator-Tot//

Worst Line - Little Marshall Your Dreams have just Been Shattered//
Well like ur Freestyles i left u on the Mic Ripped & Tattered//


Shady - Good spit man, best I have seen from ya.. your punches were hot and your flow was crazy.

Best Line - You think you sexy , yet you got a dad that look like Paul Bearer//
You call urself Terror , cause to your parents , you nutin but an error// (LOL)

Worst Line - NONE (good job man)

OVERALL - Very close battle guys, but I gotta give this to Shady cuz this is the best I have ever seen from him.. he had hard punches and he had mad hott flow.. good verse man, Terror your shit was good too.. but it was simpler then shady's work on that man and you be hott.

VOTE - Shady

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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123292

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Yeah,the rookie of the year upps his thread.

rookie of the year?.. lol, wanna battle me for that spot?.. didnt think so

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lol........chill G.Not yet.Some day we'll battle.....But not now.

uppinn

I also vote for shady, his punches owned terrors...
shady had way more powerful punches and just more of them, his flow was better and his vocab was better. I also thought his metas were more powerful and meaningful.

Nice job yo.

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20 do u know what a meta is?

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break dooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooown bitchs

terror opener was around average good creativitie and all nice punch but needed to be worded better your closer was nice i liked it good personal and punch in it just soem advice dont always rhyme 3 lines together people on this site vote against it cause they dont know what they doin and the rest of your verse had ups and downs in it had some good punchs and personals and that death row wasnt to good though nice verse

and trin your opener was decent first line was stupid punch was pretty good the multi was useless though and your closer was shaky to didnt make much sence to me decen punch though just need to work on wording it and the rest of your verse
Go look in the mirror and ask yourself "WHY DO I RAP ????? " //<<< good job of tryna bite 2 of my lines and fix em together dickhead go look in my crew league battle if yo uwanna argue wit my kid dont worry though you the 2nd person today i seen bitin my lyrics thanks for the props to

vote terror

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