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05-09-04, 10:04 PM
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i changed my title !!
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j-poll vs. accomplishment(forced word match)
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battles go up sunday night around 10:00 pm eastern check in by wedsday verses due by thrusday votes due by the next sunday around 9:00pm eastern rules: no dick riding no crew votes no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd no feeding off of other guys verse forced words must be bolded or something so people can see them bar limits: 16 bar min. 32 bar max. forced words you must use these in your battle verse or be d'q: nature, intersection, ability, process
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05-09-04, 11:13 PM
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"Ya'll Must've Forgot"
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yo whatever checkin in
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05-10-04, 12:22 AM
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#3
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I'm So Punny
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check in ...this league sucks
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05-11-04, 04:01 AM
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I'm So Punny
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this is fuckin bullshit...haah all the 'vets' are only vets because they dick ryde eachother like motherfuckers...i killed enygma last fuckin week...such bullshit he beat me 6 to 5....such bullshit...whatever...fuck you all... jks only not here's my verse...this fucking kid is the king of prewritting...but whatever...here's some keystyle check it you bitch... fuck the formalities... /// accomp beatin JP.... it just ain't reality... may get mo votes gainst me... /// only cuz he rides so much... he wears depends, size 3... yur ability lackx size, like an assian penis... /// yu try an act tough... relax, no?, cause yur crossed up like Jesus... i'd be scared wit my arms nailed, n restrained... /// you're rhymes ain't original... you're more like that bitch, Alice in Chains... this bitch still a rook not at his intersection... /// rhyming too simple for real heads but dis sites full a newbs, and he's fraid of rejection... comp i'd rather do this  ..../// then read more a yur nature.... my shits quick n thick... you'res is a gassy vapor...(where is it.where's your skill.no one's ever seen it) no one thinks of u as skilled... /// yur a cent if i'm dollar billed... yu beatin me is as likely as... jenna jameson finally bein cock fulfilled... i know how ur good, ur process is just a lil missin... ///i figured you out... the three dick family is enygma, comp, and restriction... in yur clan theres only 3 true hip hop junkies... ///claimin lil jon the best rapper... him and his 'krunked g's'... yur known for KO's?... ///yeah for you hittin the ground... yall can tell he's brain damaged.. ///when he thinks rhymin sit wit fit is profound... let's get krunked...haha you bitch...you like lil jon...mothafucker... and if you don't think it flows...you're an idiot...learn about hip hop then bitch
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05-12-04, 06:31 PM
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O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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Did you even proofread what you wrote? Cause the flow kinda sucked. JPoll had a few OK punches but they were mostly garbage. i'd be scared wit my arms nailed, n restrained... /// you're rhymes ain't original... you're more like that bitch, Alice in Chains... What kind od weak stupid punch was that? /// yur a cent if i'm dollar billed... yu beatin me is as likely as... jenna jameson finally bein cock fulfilled... Where do you get these stupid fucking lines from? Accomplishment came a lot harder in this battle than JPoll did. His flow was on point and his punches were connecting. this hotness i'm spitten gotchu processed like ground chicken... ...me prewritten... nah i spit off da top a da head like ya bitch when dick licken.../ Good punch....had me chuckling a bit.... whorred by verbs when i just quit then begin... ...kid could steel my four forced words... and I'd still fuckin win.../ Good way to close it up..... Overall accomplishment just came a lot harder in this one and it showed. His verse stayed consistant with his punches throughout the whole thing.... Vote - Accomplishment
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05-14-04, 04:18 AM
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I'm So Punny
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[QUOTE=enygma]Did you even proofread what you wrote? Cause the flow kinda sucked. JPoll had a few OK punches but they were mostly garbage.
i'd be scared wit my arms nailed, n restrained... /// you're rhymes ain't original... you're more like that bitch, Alice in Chains... you're a fucking idiot dawg...alice in chains is a band...i'm saying he's generic...like his rhymes are in figurative chains...fuck this proves how stupid you are.!!! i merk this bitch...VOTES
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05-12-04, 03:58 PM
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I'm So Punny
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god your ridiculous...it takes you 4 days to write 1 verse...fucking no talent prewritting...
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05-12-04, 04:05 PM
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#8
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"Ya'll Must've Forgot"
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i havent even began writing fine bitch i'ma fuckin type some shit upa nd straight fuckin murder you it will be in less than a fucken hour poser ass bitch..
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05-12-04, 04:27 PM
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"Ya'll Must've Forgot"
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IP:
First Off...
Yo...When I spit, from werd to werd...I tend to rip-urs... wit shit like that...ur verse belongs in poetic scriptures.../ YOu SUCK...cuz when i'm spitten rappers are hit the deckin... cuz YOUR FUCKED like a retard trapped ina intersection.../ this hotness i'm spitten gotchu processed like ground chicken... ...me prewritten... nah i spit off da top a da head like ya bitch when dick licken.../ you ain't gotta chance atta "title shot"..i said it dats right... even if i put a bullet hole through ya phrase "nice witta mic device".../ my ability to blow dis kid off da site like a clip of hollow heat seekers... and knock six seagals offya dock wit only 5 bullets outa my street sweeper.../ ya ass been jpolled and chosen to lose... ...accustom to gettin abused... cuz all ya 31 lines have been reused.../ they way you cuffin cocks, you should be under dick arrest... cuz you only spit hot shit when ya drop ya lit ciggarette.../ kid got scared and typed quick to spit when he first heard me... ..realizen he couldn't be warm in calgary... if was wearin a snowsuite over da top of his flames jersey.../ yo its just my nature to break his pen and rip his paper... take an eraser...re-write his entire verse so it had a chance later.../ whorred by verbs when i just quit then begin... ...kid could steel my four forced words... and I'd still fuckin win.../ |
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05-12-04, 06:20 PM
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"Ya'll Must've Forgot"
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05-13-04, 03:02 AM
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#11
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I'm So Punny
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IP:
such a hate vote but whatever...uppin.............
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05-13-04, 02:33 PM
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#12
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"Ya'll Must've Forgot"
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IP:
vote this stuff
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05-13-04, 11:40 PM
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#13
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"Ya'll Must've Forgot"
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IP:
votes now people
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05-14-04, 09:04 AM
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#14
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"Ya'll Must've Forgot"
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IP:
no you dont your awful.. votes...
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05-14-04, 12:14 PM
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retired.
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JPoll stop crying like a bitch, its not his fault you used terrible punches and your structure is so fucking unreadable. Seriously, nobody types verses like that. And there is a reason. And your punches? Terrible, again. The Alice in Chains one is the only decent concept you even had, and you worded it terribly. The rest of your concepts were blah. Very blah. This was really the only good punch of the battle:
"whorred by verbs when i just quit then begin... ...kid could steel my four forced words... and I'd still fuckin win.../" v/ accomp
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