Rules are

No d/r
no biting
no recycling
no unexplained votes
20-40 lines
can be prewritten or blind

U spit first

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yo comeon man get rappin,if you dont imma rap first.

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I hope you lissen to what I preached
I'll smoke ya like Chong and Cheech
I make Jesus Christ turn psycotic
Mothafucka I make buddhist monks turn neurotic
You could call my raps dark and cryptic
They make immune systems go desperatly sick
They make Don Juan turn to a Texan hick
You been mouthin everyone off here for da last time
I tear ya to pieces wit ma first line
When Im through wit ya youll be mistaken for dead
Itll look like I released a bowling ball size shot....to tha back of yo
head
Havent battled for a while but now Im back at it
So sick you could call me ILLMATIC
You came in hurr talkin tough talk
I fucked you up makin ya unable to walk
Run away everyone knows you gon start to cry
Afta I put tha mikr down yo throat and laugh while you choke and
die
You started callin yoself sonagod
But not a soul stirred and gave ya an approval nod
You betta get some prepared or unprepared shit
I don't usually battle newbs who dont know how to spit
So ponder what I speak
Cause I make poseur emcees cheeks like yours turn bleak
Cause you one of dem callin yoself dope
But you drownin and youll need me to throw ya da rescue rope
I should get tha award for most improved
Cause of so many lives I moved
Ill be laughin wen dey lower you
Cause yo raps are as good as Luda in Act A Foo
When you drop yo lines you betta hope for da 3 kings to save yo soul
Cause in dis battle you aint livin up to your role
So you betta stop rappin man
Cause for dat shitty verse,da mods wanted to hand out a ban

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there you go that 34 lines.drop your shit man,i aint got all my life to wait for ya

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^^lmao, just saw this...

ill key somthin up to merk you

...common now, you wasted 34 lines...and got merked

He said hed keep stittin till he won...which will probably be never
I mean, of course ill keep winnin...so I guess ill go on forever...
jesus christ, 34 lines? wtf?...youd think by then hed run outa spit
oh, that wasnt from his mouth...I guess he just ran outa shit...
Because thats what your...uh...words are, cemented and molded
frozen from hotness...because he keyed his verse blind folded
He told me i was disraspectful...said Id lied and hed shoot
the only thing wrong with that...is I was tellin the truth
His drawings of his rhymes suck...brains asleep cuz he bored it
all of his lines are sketchy...but that realy was his self portrait!

yo thx man ill return da fav later cause i got to do some shit right now

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up.

yooooooo people lets get dis shit voted on,stop sleepin on dis battle

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Cesus Jhist watch it jesus don't like when you curse or when you! rap lol. kidin. Dagwfatha 13 even thought a newb won. and you better stick to battling newbs. lol joking. Dagw was just better. y'all no you can't spell your names right? just wondering ha

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dawgfatha, that shit was weak, generic ass verse, no good wordplay, weak opener, closer, and straight shit in between damn,
no flow worth namin, and structure was... wack, theres the word,
could tell why you wrote it could be pre written since that shit coulda been vs anyone and half the time you'd think ya were dissin his verse, even your closer was almost a pathetic attempt at a personal against his shit, BUT HE SPIT AFTER YOU

Cesus Jhist- aight your shit wasn't great but the fact it was all so very true made it funny and better, ur opener wasn't great (but true against this kid) some nice attempts at wordplay, much more vet style than the other guy, nice structure too, don't recommend feeding too much, some cats will hate for it but no one specified, overall you took it no contest

vote- Cesus Jhist

Pftttttttttt Say What// Dawg_13 U Elevated Homie// Damn U Improved// Shit Dis Goes To Dawg Cuz Fo Betta Flowz// And Punches//

Jhist Work On Yo Punches Homie//

I Think Dis Going To Be Dawg 1st Merk// U Improved Homie// Dont Stop Keep Going!

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IAM BACK FUCKAH'Z HELL~! NEVA LOOKED SO GOOD

yes
you newbies dont understand the complexities of Cesus verse
Cesus merked him with 3 times less lines
and even though Im just one of Cesus' dickriders
I seriously think he won this shit
v/Cesus
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121587
hit that up

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R.I.P. Bodie

This is a good explanation on why Cesus won.... The first kids verse was generic at best, it had zero punchlines, It was almost torture to sit through... honestly it was horrible... Cesus didn't come incredibly hard but it was way more than enough to murder this kid... Someone should notify admin if anyone voted otherwise cuz I guarantee its votin circles.

Please return the favor http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124310

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