let me start a fite, let me get it right,
oh no dis guy is white, guesss am gonna rok da mic, tonite!
dont forget me ta mention
more i rap increase da tension,
shur i can help ya wif rap lessons,
just dont block my entrance,
u be sittin waitin in ur cage,
i bust a flo screaming in rage,
no need to repeat my words my friend,
am on da stage, ready to relase my anger in a rush.
so i tell da crowd ta hush, PLUS
so i can crush all competition out so it's just me ready ta bust.
listen...
am feeling hot ready ta take your heart,
rip u aprat,
while i rapping, i cant stop and u cant start.
shomon we waiting, i can see ya twitch
every little bit nervous, rattling,
so we call u stuttering bitch, cant utter a word , making no rhymes.
cant feel a beat, ur making me shine,
what's da competitions, dis guy's skill is wasting time.
now let me release my flow,
scream if u wont mo, fo sho,
ill give it loose control,
u know baby i rok da show

maz4real

Hmmmm......You could start by cleaning up your layout a little, make it easier to read. for instance

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ya feel me, some of the shit you sayin is cool but come at it from a higer prospective and interprit it with different words....

Pz
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