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Denver Max 4 44.44%
VALOR 5 55.56%
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Old 05-11-04, 12:45 AM   #1
Valor
A Reflection Of The Past
 
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From: inside your nightmare's
VALOR ~vs~ denver max

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10-16 lines
no feeding or recycling
no hate,crew,or d/r votes
blind spit
45 minutes

g'luck
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Old 05-11-04, 12:47 AM   #2
Valor
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............checkin in..............
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Old 05-11-04, 12:51 AM   #3
Denver Max
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yo yo yo. i'm checking like bobby orr.-----------------------------------
 
Old 05-11-04, 01:10 AM   #4
Denver Max
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you couldn't look tough if you had a million plastic surgeries.
you say you're not gay, you say pussy sparks your allergies.
wait wait wait, hold on, it just occurred to me.
ladies first bitch, where's my common courtesy?
is it clear to you? it's pretty clear to me
you couldn't get attention if you had HIV.
i wish this was hard, but i do this shit so easily
i'm writing this shit while i got bitches pleasin' me.
bitch dont be teasin' me
it's about time, i gotta be peacin' G.
 
Old 05-11-04, 01:16 AM   #5
Valor
A Reflection Of The Past
 
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yo im battling this herb named denver max......
this fool's 0-5 and hes wack its a fact........
its decent skills and thought process that he lack's......
Quote:
Originally Posted by Denver Max
what does "merk" mean?

askin me in bitch slapped what merk means...he needs to be slapped.....
he has a fucked up structure with lines that over lap.....
with played and choppy lines you cannot say this cat was born to rap.....
im gonna hit this coward with harder punches than warren sapp......
oh no hes cool tryin to checkin like bobby orr........
well by checkin in you just got ur self sent to the morg....
send ya to hell where you''ll be torchured because im the lord......
my punches and sexy ryme scheme goin right through you like a sword.....
~~(ending it like this)~~
sittin here a listening to ur extremely played concepts i cannot afford.....
battling you just got me 45 minutes of being so damn bored......

done
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Old 05-11-04, 01:30 AM   #6
Denver Max
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but seriously, what is merk short for?????????????
 
Old 05-11-04, 02:31 AM   #7
Shadows edge
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merk = beat, as in you both just merked yourselves. denver wins for not taking himself seriously at least... honestly you can't tell me either of you spent more than 5 minutes on your verses.
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Old 05-11-04, 02:31 AM   #8
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IGNORE the one above...


merk = beat, as in you both just merked yourselves. denver wins for not taking himself seriously at least, and his verse being funny. other dude, you tried and failed. ... honestly you can't tell me either of you spent more than 5 minutes on your verses.
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Old 05-11-04, 02:54 AM   #9
DFrost
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damn

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aight ta break it down
ya both sucked, ta be honest, shadow edge got a good point even if his vote probly gonna get taken off, my rapper gotta eat though, i just made him and he already bout ta die, aint even battled nobody that shits fucked up

anyway valor u suck, damn, if my rapper wasn't starving to death...
yo im battling this herb named denver max......
this fool's 0-5 and hes wack its a fact........
right there, the opener, supposed to be one of your strongest lines i lost intrest, it sucked, u suck, but i already read the other guy so i read yours too
no creativity, throwin a few names in dont make a verse good, n just cause he completly unaware of the terminology of the times dont make you any less bad, you shouldn't have even said that shit cause gettin merked by someone who don't know what merked means is just bad for business

denver max- aight ur shit was funny at least, i read it almost willingly, and u won the coin flip, structure could use a little work but it ain't stretched and horrible like the other guys, ur closer was weak opener aight, u had some alright concepts in yours at least

vote- denver max
 
Old 05-11-04, 02:56 AM   #10
DFrost
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yeah i'm drunk too so nah i dont even remember what i was gonna say no disrespect to, but fuck no disrespect i bet i disrespected if i even said somethin here and fuck ya'll motherfuckers bitch assfuckin.. yo ima go smoke peace
 
Old 05-11-04, 03:02 AM   #11
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Quote:
Originally Posted by DFrost
aight ta break it down
ya both sucked, ta be honest, shadow edge got a good point even if his vote probly gonna get taken off, my rapper gotta eat though, i just made him and he already bout ta die, aint even battled nobody that shits fucked up

anyway valor u suck, damn, if my rapper wasn't starving to death...
yo im battling this herb named denver max......
this fool's 0-5 and hes wack its a fact........
right there, the opener, supposed to be one of your strongest lines i lost intrest, it sucked, u suck, but i already read the other guy so i read yours too
no creativity, throwin a few names in dont make a verse good, n just cause he completly unaware of the terminology of the times dont make you any less bad, you shouldn't have even said that shit cause gettin merked by someone who don't know what merked means is just bad for business

denver max- aight ur shit was funny at least, i read it almost willingly, and u won the coin flip, structure could use a little work but it ain't stretched and horrible like the other guys, ur closer was weak opener aight, u had some alright concepts in yours at least

vote- denver max

yes this guy took the words right out of my mouth and broke it down
Denver Max got this
Valor you need to elevate
pz
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Old 05-11-04, 12:02 PM   #12
Denver Max
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vote on this isht!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Old 05-11-04, 12:57 PM   #13
Denver Max
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vote on this isht!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Old 05-11-04, 02:19 PM   #14
Valor
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Wow All Yall Are Herbs....yall All Goin On My Black List.............
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Old 05-11-04, 02:22 PM   #15
accomplishment
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ok not a very good battle you both need to elevate

dnever max...

you need to come with more punches and personals not being tuff shit thats played and hit him where it hurts your flow is medioacre you need to work on that a little bit...

valor...
ok..not a great verse but you had some personals where denver lacked thats how you got the upper hand neverthe less your flow was off you need ot work on that two... your both need alot of elevation...

vote valor

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