Aiight heres the lowdown

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Where the fuck did this cat go? Be here by tonight dog

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Yo dog you couldent hit me wit a *good* punch line if you had a million rubber bands,
cause your rhymes are *bad* like Michael Jacksons lovers hands,
and their *sadder* than when they found out his nose was ina can,
so sit back relax and *try* and refrain,
as my lyricks hit your back as you *bribe* to get out of the way,
and you *dive* to get out of the this rain,
but when it rains it *pours* and thiers no escape,
when you try to settle the *score* you find out its too late,
try to open a new *door* then you get traped by another gate,
you couldent find *your* way out of this had a compass on your waist,
you coundent spit a tight rhyme if you *were* to cut and paist.

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Originally Posted by Indeph Lyricalsolja you illy on the sickness tip.

Aiight up and out

Dis cat think he got skillz, but I'm gonna win without a doubt//1
you is no lyrical soldja, you couldn't be a lyrical boyscout//2
When I'm done with you, you be like "Gumby", you soft at the core//3
You be ridin so much "dick" you be known as the "lyrical whore"//4
You have a copy n pasters vocabulary of under 10 verbs//5
touchin the computer screen is the only way people can feel ya wordz//6
ya punches have no weight, like a plastic bag in the wind//7
ya face is like a baseball glove, I be breakin it in//8
So in closin, like a camera, you da one I'm exposin'//9
I know ya flows ain't hott, they so bad they be "frozen"//10

Yeah Yeah lets get da votin goin

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Originally Posted by Indeph Lyricalsolja you illy on the sickness tip.

hell on earth won this battle as a matter of fact you murked this kid.your punches were good and they were really sharp. solja you need work lots of it you should really look over your vers cause it looks as if you rushed this trash your punches didnt land or make since.for example you said


Yo dog you couldent hit me wit a *good* punch line if you had a million rubber bands,
cause your rhymes are *bad* like Michael Jacksons lovers hands,

what does rubber bands have to do wit punches


ma vote hell on earth

I ment his punches dont hurt like rubber bands but i guess yall didnt get that so fuck it

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Originally Posted by Indeph Lyricalsolja you illy on the sickness tip.

aiight i'll break it down
lyriclesolja:
Flow: 7/10
Punches: 6/10
Personals: 6/10
Metas: 6/10
Multies: 6/10
Wordplay: 6/10
Overall: 38/60
u came aiight...nothing more for me 2 say
hellonearth:
Flow: 7/10
Punches: 7/10
Personals: 6/10
Metas: 7/10
Multies: 6/10
Wordplay: 7/10
Overall: 40/60

came stronger and stronger punches
n aiight battle
vote = hellonearth

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Aiight going for da KO

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touchin the computer screen is the only way people can feel ya wordz//6


Lsolja-7.5
HellOn Earth-7.9

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Aight good battle Hell it looks like a KO congrats much props............

Holla Back maybe there will be a round 2 in the future cause honestly gettin knocked out sucks................LOL!!

Peayce

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Originally Posted by Indeph Lyricalsolja you illy on the sickness tip.