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Old 05-12-04, 09:27 PM   #1
Adroit
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Tell Me What You Think

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I can tell you dont kno what to do
so when you rap be ready for a critical review
use other lines that redefine your style
bring somethin knew that people havent heard in a while
i grip glocks that make you shell shocked
like in the morning when you jump to the sound of an alarm clock
bust shots in parking lots in tons of spots
i live in a drug infested spot
and i hit the spot like Jason Kidd's jump shot


tell me what you think or just give me some advice.
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Old 05-12-04, 10:48 PM   #2
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I think u need more work, but over all it was straight!!!!
By the way u want to battle?
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Old 05-13-04, 07:46 PM   #3
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ok lets go
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Old 05-14-04, 11:09 PM   #4
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Ah bro this is a prime example on what you need to work on if this is really yours then you can see the potential
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Old 05-15-04, 01:36 PM   #5
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^^^thanks for the posts
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Old 07-02-04, 04:19 PM   #6
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keep up the feed back
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