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05-13-04, 10:39 PM
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
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Ascending Moons
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.::Ascending Moons::. By: R-Rated aka Re$tricted (Verse 1) As The Earth Turns, Interplanetary Moons Shift Across Space The Fidelty Of The Linear Line Diminished Without A Trace Particles Of The Crust Collide With Each Other, Disaster Proceeding Articles Of Love Lust Collide With Each Other, Two Moons Seeding As The Stars Around Us Glissin and Glimmer Off Your Beautiful Surface As We Pass, Stares Abroad, Love At First Site, Meeting You For A Purpose As You Passed Me By, Thought Patterns Scattered Threw My Celestrial Brain Couldn’t Get You Off My Mind, Intentions Of Touching and Being With You Insane As Meteorites Approach Your Surface, Anxiety Started To Build Within Save You From Harm, Discourage On My Face, Commitin Sum Sins Passing Saturn Now, Time Has Seemed To Curupt My Destend Path Not What I Want, Don’t Push Me, Cause I Won’t Hesitate To Release My Rath Explosions, The Old Stars Die Off, Luckily I’m Still In My Youth Gravital Force Pulling Me Towards Pluto, Keeping It Hood To Da Truth My Boyz From Pluto All Formed Around Da Hood, Spitting Sum Bars Looking Around, Conspicious, Watching and Listening For Gravitational Cars I Can See Da Milky Way, and Damn She Looking Good From Dis Glace Let The Sun Hit My Good Side and Pose Up In My B-Boy Stance.. (Hookx2) The Accending Moons, Traveling Threw The Galaxy The Accending Moons, Seeing The True Reality A Quick Glance and Baby I’m Hooked Right In Though Much Debree, Trust In Me, I’ma Keep Looking [Verse 2] As Silky As Milky Looking I Gotta Keep My Distance For My Safety Though She Sexy, I Know My Destiny and Baby I Gotta Find The’ The Gravitation Force Shifts and Now I’m Traveling East Towards Uranus Watching The Gods Fight, And Aphroditie Trying Re-Unit The Two of Us Hope In The Back Of My Thoughts, Dope Tracks Ablot In My Thoughts Your Smile Keeps Reitterating In My Mind, Blank As An Ink Blot Keeping My Thoughts Dope, I Still Write and Spit Sum Verses With Time Traveling Threw Galaxies and Light-Years Just To Find That Special Dime Fasho Gurl, Is It The Curves Of Your Surface That Keeps Me Adoring? Or Is It Those Sexy Eyes and Smile That Keep My Heart Melting? As I Look Over I Can See Apollo 13 Heading Toward My Boy Young Without Percaution Here Comes A Meteorite Shower, Damn That Stung Threw The Pain Of Life, I Still Continue My Journey For The One and Only You Theres The Black Hole, Black Abyss, Hopefully It Did Not Steal My Moon.. (Hookx2) The Accending Moons, Traveling Threw The Galaxy The Accending Moons, Seeing The True Reality A Quick Glance and Baby I’m Hooked Right In Though Much Debree, Trust In Me, I’ma Keep Looking ~R~ Last edited by Re$TricTed : 05-13-04 at 10:42 PM. |
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05-24-04, 08:06 PM
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Vendetta the K.O. King
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This is ill. Good knowledge and word usage for real. Verse 2 was ill, liked the metaphors. These cats on here won't be able to follow this.
Fav lines: Particles Of The Crust Collide With Each Other, Disaster Proceeding Articles Of Love Lust Collide With Each Other, Two Moons Seeding As Silky As Milky Looking I Gotta Keep My Distance For My Safety Though She Sexy, I Know My Destiny and Baby I Gotta Find The’ Threw The Pain Of Life, I Still Continue My Journey For The One and Only You Theres The Black Hole, Black Abyss, Hopefully It Did Not Steal My Moon.. Good looking for real playa.
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05-25-04, 01:36 AM
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New to RB
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thas some shit
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05-25-04, 02:13 PM
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
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Thanks For The Feedback Peeps..
Looking For More Though..C'mon You All..Give Me Sum Feedback ~R~ |
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05-25-04, 02:35 PM
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Flyweight
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whoa hot shit... ya got a good vocab.. although u should try workin on multis... (i know i know it would of fitted to this concept)... but with that vocab u could spitt some nice shit fa real~
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05-25-04, 03:25 PM
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(00)O=(00) <-- I will knock you the fuck out........
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yo that was iight shyt def likin keep it comin............................................. ...........................
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