OBTAINING TEERS


Never have I assumed this blatant outcome
Men are considered dogs, I'm a loyal one
The downpour begins with pelliting force
I gaze above as i consume other's remorse
Dampening my atire, The emotions strong
It's an ongoing process, Unwillingly prolonged
Feeling peers' struggles, Cries results in rain
I cringe at the continous outburst of pain
Slowly but sruely i'm paying thier dues
The precipitation amount above my shoes
Their denial of their ever so helpless pleas
Leaves me wading in water up to my knees
People feel rejected and put out of place
I begin to shiver as it accumulates up to my waist
They are haunted, Can't capture the rest
I overlapped a breath as it engaged my chest
People for eternity are on the outside looking in
My teeth chatter as the depth rises to my chin
Helpless, They figure the conclusion is their demise
I'm petrified when the liquid seeks my eyes
I assist the needy, But it's now somethin I regret
As i drown in teers, When it settles above my head

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