time to get sonned bitch

5-10 bars
No d/r hate or crew votes
NO FEEDING OFF MY SHIT
And I will spit in a lil' bit.

~CJ~

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ok...check. but i'll spit in 6th or at home, so at arownd 3

Phat Mic, I think you don't put in the work, You be acting real lazy,
Your bars got more stretch marks than a woman that had a baby.
Actually, answer honestly, is there anything you do well,
Just tell someone and have them type it, we know you can't spell.
You already know that Ill Spits and my name is synonomous,
Shoulda kept that alias 'cause on here you are anonymous.
Want me to start it of, that's ok you'll never see me afraid,
And you can go to Hawaii, I know I'll still neva see you laid.
You claim you're fuckin' godly? Quit hangin' on Chrit's nuts,
The pictures you paint? you a Starvin' Artist, here's a few bucks.
Think you got skills, goin' is gettin' rough, but a diamond is forever,
Forever witout skills, beat Jay, yeah the day right after neva.

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im batleing this bitch to prove he had a chance
having his pathetic lyrics will have you hung off da branch
all william hung like no lyrics no beat and just no flow
and like delion get blowed off da band that no shows
quick to step but in the end you'll get creamed
jerk off with sanitizers is the only way to cum clean
Jay you just a pawn here, I know I got you crew shook
Cuz face it, Dating George will never give you the W...Bush
This shit is just practice so consider that fear is a factor
I admit that I put I.P.'s in check like angry internet hackers
no need to know bout ya private life we know ya crews unheard
thinks he's a young gun but have u heard of a murderous Blue bird(jay)
Ya gonna see it, dat dudes ripped and appauled as if a condom snaped
dip da head of a pen in bloodz of poets and still couldn't apply skill on ya raps

done lets get some votes...

uppin for the votes...

uppin for votes...

Aiyo...

Phat Mic: 6/10
I Wasn't Feeling To Strucure Nor The Flow, But I Felt A Few Punches, Sum Just Didn't Go Well Do To Word Usuage. Work On Dem Metaphors and Punches. Nice Dope.

Countree Jay: 7/10
I Felt Yours More and I Acutally Got The Personals That You Included In There Cause I Know Phat Mic Pretty Well. Metaphors Were Alright and I Loved The Line Bout Him Riding Chrits Nutz LOL..Newayz..Nice DRop Cuz.

Props To Both, Stay Dope!

Vote - Countree Jay

~R~

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CJ drop or Raw Material

Phat Mic, I think you don't put in the work, You be acting real lazy,
Your bars got more stretch marks than a woman that had a baby.
WOW REALLY NICE OPENER 8.5/10
Actually, answer honestly, is there anything you do well,
Just tell someone and have them type it, we know you can't spell.
NOT THAT GOOD AT ALL 7/10
You already know that Ill Spits and my name is synonomous,
Shoulda kept that alias 'cause on here you are anonymous.
UMM ITS OK 7/10
Want me to start it of, that's ok you'll never see me afraid,
And you can go to Hawaii, I know I'll still neva see you laid.
ITS WAS DECENT AT BEST 7.5/10
You claim you're fuckin' godly? Quit hangin' on Chrit's nuts,
The pictures you paint? you a Starvin' Artist, here's a few bucks.
NOT FEELING AT ALL 6/10
Think you got skills, goin' is gettin' rough, but a diamond is forever,
Forever witout skills, beat Jay, yeah the day right after neva.
7/10 NOT THAT GOOD

7.1/10


Phat Mic

im batleing this bitch to prove he had a chance
having his pathetic lyrics will have you hung off da branch
OK OK...THAT WAS NOT A GOOD OPENER 6/10
all william hung like no lyrics no beat and just no flow
and like delion get blowed off da band that no shows
WHACK IN MY OPINION 5/10
quick to step but in the end you'll get creamed
jerk off with sanitizers is the only way to cum clean
I ACTUALLY GOT THE PUNCH 7/10
Jay you just a pawn here, I know I got you crew shook
Cuz face it, Dating George will never give you the W...Bush
THAT WAS FUCKIN GIMP 5/10
This shit is just practice so consider that fear is a factor
I admit that I put I.P.'s in check like angry internet hackers
7/10 ITS A DECENT BAR AT BEST
no need to know bout ya private life we know ya crews unheard
thinks he's a young gun but have u heard of a murderous Blue bird(jay)
UMMM NOT FEELING 6/10
Ya gonna see it, dat dudes ripped and appauled as if a condom snaped
dip da head of a pen in bloodz of poets and still couldn't apply skill on ya raps
NOPE BAD CLOSER PERIOD. 6/10

5/10

VOTE CJ

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i think CTJ took this one....phat your verse wasnt all that good...and the line about comin clean wit sanitizers is really played out come more original...creativitie makes a verse alot harder and CTJ had the creativitie...and also a good peronsal decent punches good flow and structure and decent meta's...phat u had a couple good punches and good wordplay...not much more to your verse...structure was a lil off didnt flow too well...but overall good verses from both

CTJ:7/10
Phat Mic:6/10

vote:CTJ

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Uppin' 4 votes^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

~CJ~

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