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i step up to the mic and tell your pussy ass to take a hike
im new in town, but im already the best around
i see a buncha shit goin down, the people need to hear my sound
i make lil babies cry and old people wanna die
some say im hot, some say im not
but they all wish they could flow like me, blow like me, get outta control like me
cuz u see ill bust a rhyme any time, hit you if you get outta line
the cops see me wit a blunt, yo girl sees me and i know just what she want
so dont try to front, and i won't try and stunt
if you do try shit ill get in your face, ill put you to disgrace, this isn't no footrace
so why you running, you ain't that cunning
i'll chase you down, til you run outta town
now im gonna let you go, ill just go flow some mo'
payce

yo that was hot man.....check out my rhyme its right under yours.......