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absolutely no crew/friend/bull shit/hate/ or D.R. votes

all dat shit will be contested



check in yo


i'll spit first...but your verse is due by tomorrow



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when you gonna spit?? when is my verse due by also?

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hey lets just close this then its just wasting space

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aiyo, **walks in..sees my competition..shakes my head**

tsk tsk..

First off,

U spittin wack shit caused ur discharge..tha game don't want no bitch dawg..-
U gotta 'off-color' discharge..'flames' in ya sig leavin' dis kid charred..-
I'm talkin' Fred Kreuger burns..u got more dick riders than I eva heard..-
Ur reputation ain't earned..I give u street Cred- smash ya face into da curb..-
Even Triple said it.."Discharge mah boyee but he ain't shit on this board"..-
Ur friends are stabbin' u..so dat makes this diss a double-edged sword..-
Nigga, u've had an 'easy ride' to this 'point..challengin' babe heads..-
I ain't new here..so I'll murder u and mail ur soul back next day air..-
And I say your style is a 'rusty Unicycle'..One-Tired piece of shit..-
After I'm done beatin' ya ass..this site you will be leavin' quick..-
I got "no loss4 rhymes"..but dat kid as close as a cheerleader gets..-
And ur friends with this biter..guess dats why u got a bleedin' dick..-
Betta believe it bish..ur not even mentioned in the top 10 on the site..-
Even ur crew thinks ur wack..u jus made 'em look better when they fight..-


fuck outta huuuuuur


**This kid is stupid..u think u the "chosen one" with dat Matrix shit?..-
Pssf..if this battle was da Band and u Puff..still couldn't make it bitch..**


fuck outta huuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuur

chheckin in chcken in in -------------------------------

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he thought he had a chance but with two lines i could stop him from winning//
ive got his head spinning,after i drop two lines his confidence already thinning//
with a weak verse ^^ he easly threw the match on the ropes for me to take//
tryin to battle me...thats a mistake!...u cant back out now... sorry..its too late//
u had a good record goin....but your gonna lose that newb record FAST!//
my punches man-handeling you, im lyrically destroying you,you wont LAST!!
LYRICALLY crushing your bones, severing and snapping them in half//
step aside your in my path,your "boat-is-sinking" and your without a life raft//
he's the real dickrider on AOL askin for votes, HE'S A DICKRIDING EXAMPLE//
not trying hard, .::N-SIGHT::. is easly beaten im just givin him a lyrical sample//
bringin other people in this battle its between me and you WHAT IS THIS?//
ur weak, but keep tryin cuz you might endup at the rap "special-olympics//
inject some calcium into your rhymes, there weak fractured and feeble//
cracking-your-cranium,squashing you like a beetle,your"simpily-beatable"//
in your verse good rhymes are lacked, verse is cracked, ur flow is wack//
your lyricaly smacked and punches dont connect,like freethrows and SHAQ//
u told me to try as hard as i can,so i am to teach you some facts and a lesson//
ive already won the battle the"jig-is-up"quit with the fake gangster impression//
like i said when you dropped that verse we all knew you didnt have a chance//
realize n-sight ive tortured you and lyrically hung you "from-DA-BRANCH//

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nice drops both ya'll
n sight nice flow...some punches///structure was good

discharge...good flow....more punches...good structure

overall n sight had da flow but discharge had tha punches and structure

yo discharge shorten ya lines bro

my vote discharge...

vote on dis aight home bois wun/// http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124651

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n sight - okay you started off good....first few bars were hot....than u fell off....u need to sustain the tempo....so werk on that....flow was straight...punches werelacked...only about 4 good ones....wordplay could use sum werk....u tried too hard for multis toward the end....u dont always need them.....no great personals....nolost4rhymes bar was decent....jus werk on wordplay and sustaining your tempo.....decent verse...
6.7/10

discharge - aight another decent spit...started off decent....kicked it up sum....fell off a lil....then kicked it up some toward the end.....u also tried to hard for multis....so werk on that....same level on wordplay.....elevate there.....u had more and better meta's....so thats a plus.....u had better punches....didnt have the better flow....no great personals either.....
7.4/10

Vote - discharge...because of the punches....

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That Old School Mother Fucker

Aint That A Bitch?

Crhyme Sindicate

N sight-Nice spit........You came hard and weak with it which means you took this
really by a lil though......you had everything uncluding similies and
metaphores......just work on a few things and ya will be there......

Discharge-Came kind of weak....Work on something structure was ok
but work on some thing.....balace was good but some was
weak and some was hard.....But keep elevatin and work on alot
of things
v/insight

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Honestly to me discharge came wit long lines but not enuff substance in his bars
N-site had more orginiailty fo real...i mean on battle grounds he would have won this easy..he had alot of different techs that worked well to me so nsite gets my vote

SB

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BATHING APE...(BAPE) FANATIC....

Aight Check This...

N-Sight: 6/10
Your Verse Was Alright, Punches Were SO-SO, But You Lacked Hot Metaphors and Multis. Flow Was Alright, But You Lacked Word Play. Just Elevate With The Concepts.

Discharge: 7/10
Nice Drop, Ugh...No Personals In Your Spit Really, Punches Were Alright, Your Metas Were Nice....But Your Structure Is Horrid. Nice Verse Though, No Doubt.

Vote - Discharge

Props To Both, Stay Dope~

~R~

aight....i agree with whoever said that discharges lines were long but lacked substance...but i didn't feel that the other dude had much more substance..he just got to the point quicker...over all...i think it was a tie...nothin really stood out and grabbed me...accept for the fact that the first dude...i didn't like how he said "dis" and "da" instead of sayin this and the....no offense...but you sound handicapped talkin like that...so thats the edge that i give to discharge

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Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate.

"watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox

The I.H.C.J.S.F.M.T.R.H.P.M.M.W.T.S.M.S.I.T.F.F.W.A.S. O Crew

^^^ lol..sure...dats my steelo

outta all deez votes...only 3 were actually qualified to vote in da polls...lol


coo...uppin for more registered voters

aiight....

n-sight:7.7/10
good verse...some average punches but they were creative...which is always a plus...structure was good...some good meta's....u were more original...

discharge:7.5/10
another good verse but your structure and a couple played lines made you lose this battle....a couple good punches and some good wordplay...ok meta's...good flow...the beginning part of your verse was wack but the last half was good

vote: n-sight...overall he had the slightly better verse...mostly because his structure and creativity

~!1!~

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and i woupld poll my vote but i didnt know discharge had me black listed...tsk tsk tsk why discharge :sniffle: im sad that u dont like me :P

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