aight rules is 10 to 16 lines max
no d.r hate or crew votez
no bite or recyclin
u spit first
chekin in then drop ..wun...

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chekin in...ill drop rite afta u nigga chek in then drop wun...

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cHECKIN IN... HERE IT GOES...

The game seems to be filled michael jacksons and titos//
When i think of jokas i think of mexicans dressed in speedos//
Too many cats thinkin they sick but how many stinkers-fell//
Everyday aint halloween but still you dress like tinkerbell//
This is the feature presentation but the movies is see through//
Yo rhymes be borin me to death like when you sit through previews//
See foo, you gone pay for what your boys got you into//
Its gonna end fatal i dont care what you been through//
You gone pay for what rapbattles got you into//
Dealin wit me will have you wit your head wrapped like a hindu//
THis cat responded to my battles and holla'd//
If you be doin this for cash, you should start dancin for dollas//
And when this battle is over cats is askin you where you been//
Cuz you'll be harder to find than remidial kids who can count to ten//
Lyrically villainous im in this battle strictly for a win//
The shit i spit will have jokas burnin in hell like its a sin//

Holla back, its on you... dont rip me too bad... Its all fot the love of hip hop

That what i jus spit was hella can... oh well homey drop...1

aight chek diz....

my rhymes hurt u mentally //
u never knew my boys carried more bars then a state penatentary//
i'm a high school kid so i'm teachin and readin //
come up in ur house and shoot ur mother while she's breast feedin //
her hole chest bleedin//
before i left i i wrote a letter on her neck read it//
i buss gunz and puts hawks in niggas backs//
and ur gurl give more brains then the aliens from mars attacks
man its like i be sippin the pain/
and ur girl comes and tutors me dawg so she really "givin me brains"/
its like i be knifin the point/
fuck the breasts, i shoot ur mom right in the groin/
330 the cheapest buildin'/
cut ur adams apple out put it in a salad and eat feed the children
man yall know da jokah he be shittin crack/
the only time you get "pussy" is when you liftin "cats"/
im the truth man, who be you?/
get shots in the belly leave you missin like scooby doo/
its either the glock 9, i got mine/
fuck coke, ill leave you redder then stop signs/

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aight yo uppin fo votez.................................

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uppin fo votez....

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uppin fo votes come on vote on diz aight wun......and holla at ma otha battle too wun Da Jokah Vs Don aight wun....

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uppin fo votes yo holla wun....

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now see this was a godd batlle although jokah took this onw the only reason is becasue lyr u didnt have punches that hurt they rhmyed good but didint hit hard if u had some decent punches u couuldve won jokah nice in every thing although make some lines longer ma vote jokah


hit my battle up aginst lyrical demon 04 i will upp it so u can see it

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merked list: spiky2k8, da jazz, young jigga, hoping to beat many other membaz

1. tha gilla teen :whooped that nigga
2. spiky 2k8 (2) :thats was a funny battle
3. da jazz :easy ass win also funny battle
4. young jigga :fun battles althought i won easyly
5. youndkd33: that bitch was a whiner about lines oh well i still win

im gona have to vote da jokah on this one because he always comes hard with hard punches and he has an amazing flow. the one thing u can improve on though is maybe usin the persons name in some of the rhymes cause u have the skill to make a line up quick jus itd be a lot more effective if u had lines about that persons name

dalyricalvillain, your stuff wasnt that bad but it does need some work. u have the real potential to come up wit good busts for ur opponents but i think like me u cant put it into words. but u have a good battle and try workin on ur flow a little bit more but never sacrifice flow for good hits.good job pc

my vote-da jokah

A'ight...this was a one-sided battle...Villain, I thought you came a'ight in the first couple of lines...but everythin when down hill...I thought you shoulda came a lot harder, but flow was good...Jokah...I thought your structure was wack as fuck...but your punches is what one you this battle. Everyline was more or less direct.

No hate.

Vote- Jokah

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aight hnax yo uppin fo votes....

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DIS WAS A GOOD BATTLE

DA JOKAH

BEST LINE :before i left i i wrote a letter on her neck read it//
i buss gunz and puts hawks in niggas backs//
and ur gurl give more brains then the aliens from mars attacks
man its like i be sippin the pain/
and ur girl comes and tutors me dawg so she really "givin me brains"/
its like i be knifin the point/
fuck the breasts, i shoot ur mom right in the groin/
330 the cheapest buildin'/

WORST LINE:cut ur adams apple out put it in a salad and eat feed the children
man yall know da jokah he be shittin crack/
the only time you get "pussy" is when you liftin "cats"/
im the truth man, who be you?/
get shots in the belly leave you missin like scooby doo/
its either the glock 9, i got mine/
fuck coke, ill leave you redder then stop signs/ TO ME IT WAS KINDA PLAYED//

LYRICAL VILLIAN

BEST LINE:The game seems to be filled michael jacksons and titos//
When i think of jokas i think of mexicans dressed in speedos//
Too many cats thinkin they sick but how many stinkers-fell//
Everyday aint halloween but still you dress like tinkerbell//

WORST LINE:This is the feature presentation but the movies is see through//
Yo rhymes be borin me to death like when you sit through previews//
See foo, you gone pay for what your boys got you into//
Its gonna end fatal i dont care what you been through//
You gone pay for what rapbattles got you into//
Dealin wit me will have you wit your head wrapped like a hindu//
THis cat responded to my battles and holla'd//

OVERALL:

NICE BATTLE // DIS GO TO JOKAH CUZ HE HAD FLOWZ BUT WORK ON YO PUNCHES MAN// DEY BALANCED ( UP AND DOWN)//

LYRICAL VILLIAN// WORK ON FLOWZ CUZ TO ME DAT WHOLE VERSE WAS PLAYED// WORK ON YO FLOWZ AND PUNCHES// U GOTS TO GET AT HIM// TALK BOUT HIS MAMMA

VOTE// DA JOKAH

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IAM BACK FUCKAH'Z HELL~! NEVA LOOKED SO GOOD

yo i dunno if yall smokin somethin makin everyone retarded or i'm still fucked up from before but i thought villain killed it, his multis was off the fuckin chain, vocab was good especially on the rhymes, he had mad punches that hit way harder than jokahs and his flow was great, metas,wordplay, ORIGINALITY, so as i said ya must all be smokin some good ass shit to be sayin he lost to this

The game seems to be filled michael jacksons and titos//
When i think of jokas i think of mexicans dressed in speedos//
Hot opener, personal, meta, wordplay

4 bars that killed it, (last 4)
You gone pay for what rapbattles got you into//
Dealin wit me will have you wit your head wrapped like a hindu//
funny as hell...
THis cat responded to my battles and holla'd//
If you be doin this for cash, you should start dancin for dollas//
Nice hot line to follow it
And when this battle is over cats is askin you where you been//
Cuz you'll be harder to find than remidial kids who can count to ten//
HOLLA, stays on him, is funny as hell, pullin mad shit the other cat didnt
Lyrically villainous im in this battle strictly for a win//
The shit i spit will have jokas burnin in hell like its a sin//
not a great closer but still good

my rhymes hurt u mentally //
u never knew my boys carried more bars then a state penatentary//
WEAK, especially for an opener, u know how many ppl have said that shit?

i aint gonna do the whole shit but it ain't good, structure was wack and flow was insanly off and punches were all played and i dunno, just stupid, so my vote goes to lyrical villain even if it is against yall