10-15 lines max...
no d/r
no crew votes
no bittin
check in then spit within 20 mins or DQ
u spitt firts

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checkin in!!!!! u spitt..I'll drop right after you!!!

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like "Instant win Prizes" i jus can't loose//
"SmokeSkreen" u got ya name from a pokemon move//lol
calm down dude b4 ya ass catch a full clip//
word on da street "General" aint da one ta full wit//
i'll leave ya body full of bulletz da size of pool stickz//
i'm thug enuff ta leave u fuk'd up wit ya wig split//
i'll cause a smokscreen and den snatch ya necklace//
and leave nothin but ya brainz decomposed n da reckage//
since da good die young ya life gonna b short//
u couldn't b hot if i burnt u wit da "Olymipc Torch"//(WOO!!)
u soff but u wanna b a corporate G//
i'm so sick dey think i'm comin out wit a new disease//

ight fam GL drop......

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Conductin' a lesson school u till the end of the session
No need for a weapon my punches damage u wit a double impression
On to the next section drive you to a deeper depression
Switchin directions leave da General wit a puzzled expression
Ya style is diminished before you start you be finished
You could stand right in fromt of me..All I would see is a blemish
Hood you can''t be foreal man why you gotta pretend
You couldn't keystroke a WIN... if ya typed W-I-N
Hood talkin that trash but he know I know that he bluffin'
Check it..I'mma give him my gun turn around and watch him do nothin'
Hardcore battle bitch spittin versus that's stunnin'
Make you fold like Eddie George when Ray Lewis is commin'

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Smoke takes this one no hate'n, the puches were more forthcomming, He didnt waste time with filler verses like "snatch your necklace" that line was filler no real punch there. As well his opener and close were stronger other than that this was a pretty even battle.

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Hood you can''t be foreal man why you gotta pretend
You couldn't keystroke a WIN... if ya typed W-I-N
Hood talkin that trash but he know I know that he bluffin'
Check it..I'mma give him my gun turn around and watch him do nothin'
Hardcore battle bitch spittin versus that's stunnin'
Make you fold like Eddie George when Ray Lewis is commin'

This was Smokes hottest part of the verse and it came in the end- I didn't think he was gonna pull off the victory until I got half way through the verse when he started droppin some punches... His flow was excellent most of the verse and it had good struc.

like "Instant win Prizes" i jus can't loose//
"SmokeSkreen" u got ya name from a pokemon move//lol
calm down dude b4 ya ass catch a full clip//
word on da street "General" aint da one ta full wit//
i'll leave ya body full of bulletz da size of pool stickz//
i'm thug enuff ta leave u fuk'd up wit ya wig split//
This was General Hoods best part of the verse, and the olympic torches one later on was a punchline, but noone of em hit very hard, I think you just need more time and youll elevate.... Vote- $

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Smoke got this. He came harder wit the punches had decent personals structure was nice and easy to read multies werent there either way but smoke put out a decent verse prop to ya. General Keep it up and elevate peace

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smoke got this 1. he had better punches n more personals.. the flow and the structure was good .

general hood you had some funny parts in yours which were good but your punches were weaker than smokes,

all in all i thought i was a good batle.

vote: smoke

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smoke took it pretty easily, he had flow structure and punches over hood, it was pretty straightforward, hood- your shit didnt flow right, it came off kinda weak and broken, and what the fuck u comin up wit pokemon shit?