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virgina is only a newbie, your faceing a lyrical champion/
your just a lyrical shambles, stop wid the talk n the ramble/
im sliceing you into you like poinsoness led, fuckin up ur head/
worse than david blaine, usein no tricks but lyrics that stick/
you can't destroy me, i got a force field to protect me/
when you try the bullets just miss me, reboundin back at you/
im wastein presious time rappin at ya, im sure virgina should be suckin dick/
she's gettin tired of rap, tired of the defeat losses, should put a label stamped on your head notifiein/
your a disgrace, don't care if your female or male/
slap bitchs, worse than eminem slappin kim marshall/
no escape im the devel, a verbal abuser, a female beater, even a sex change castrator/

I put your MIND at ease,
with my FINE tips that make this pussy bleed//
if ya wanna be gangsta nigga just get strapped,
cause when i pull this trigga i'll leave ya chest gapped//
This Virginia boi likes ta act a fool,
i brake ya knee caps-ta-slap ya till you drool//
coming from london with the intent ta be real,
this shyt for americans bitch.......dont get ya head peeled//..............done

virginai nice flow. i like your punches, nice multiples for arookie. but fine mind gets my vote b/c he came harder. better personals. even though i didn't like what he said bout va. no hard fellings but you were outmatched virginia. you have to pck your battles carefully. fine mind nice verses, you need to try to rhymes more though. we might be from the same place but i don't give favors. return the fava

vote= fine mind

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a yo dat battle was madd short doggies ya gotta make it longa or sum tin but dis is wut i think

Virginia Fool

Flow- 4/10
Structure- 4.5/10
Punches- 5.5/10
Rhymes- 6/10
Total- 20/40

Virginia u was nice but u cood do betta derre was no personals ya best line was ya first and it was still weak but keep spittin u'll elevate

Fine MInd

Flow- 6/10
Stucture- 3/10
Punches- 7/10
Rhymes- 5.5/10
Total- 21.5/40

I think Fine Mind took dis one b/c of his punches n shyt da only thing dat messed u up was ur structure


good battle but ma vote goes to fine mind

nothing impressive here, 2 newbie verses. fine mind, no personals or punches really, and your rhyming didn't rhyme at the end, weak verse all around
virginia, weak but had the structure a little better down, you got the set up than punch thing goin even if it was weak and you threw a couple personals, and nice closer
vote- virginia

fine mind got this..other dude's shit was real amature..but u gotta start somewhere..try ta maybe use some metas once & a while..structure ya rhyme scheme betta..1

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a yo, both of yall really need to step it up as far this battle. fine mind had nice puches and a nice flow all together but I liked Virginia Fool just a little bit betta and i'm from VA. Also fine mind made the rules and said 10 lines and he went over 10 lines his self but anyway Virginia Fool gets my vote, and like I said, both of yall need to step it up.

return the fava (taken over vs. Graphix)

vote=Virginia Fool

sorry but need some votes...................................

Yeah fine mind won this battle...

no escape im the devel, a verbal abuser, a female beater, even a sex change castrator/

heavy liked that shit.. Virginia..

if ya wanna be gangsta nigga just get strapped,
cause when i pull this trigga i'll leave ya chest gapped

I though that fine had the better punchs and flow and just about everything
my vote gose to Fine..

Finr got this even though he didnt rhyme. Virginia ur lines were too short and u need to work on ur punches more it was aight for a newbie but u need to elevate. Fine again structure was off and no obvious rhyming but the punches were enough on this 1 Lucky

V/Fine Mind < ELEVATE

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