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Checkin in as u called me out first...............

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R.I.P OMB

To Be Honest...I Don't Know Why I Bothered

mad dog you an't gonna murk a cat cuz im another dog ready to bite heads off/
this fucker needs 1 day for him to reply back for another shitty rap/
don't wanna here it bound to be crap, like you should quite rap altogether/
you don't show no tallent only someone for me to fuck up, with balls hung out to lik/
the mad dogs got rabies need to be urgently tested dribblein from mouth like foot and mouth/
put the dog down taken to a vet to give it the lethal injection/
you never use similes in words as or like, like your a hermathidite/
shitty rapper with a stammer, a wannabe claimer humping tupacs cd out/
leave his shit alone better den your shit will ever be, fuckin sissy i could call you all the names under the sun/
my first pun murked dis ugly dog thats looks like a dog from the muppets/
your on a puppet string dangleing from a ceiling tangled the fuck up/
twisted in knots made crafted, you now look like ponicio in wooden blocks/

Round 2...head not spinnin this time (Check round 1)...ok he stepped up but time i smacked him down!

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Round 2 and less lines equals less rhymes but results still the same/
Fine Mind why did u ask me to put u through the same sorta pain?/
Ok u got the structure in ur raps, but the rhymes still lack/
Tryin to rhyme 'off' and 'rap' hows about i hit u 'soft' and hold 'back'/
Fuck that u's wack and ima expose ya/
If u were a bitch...ur skirt would be lifted above yer shoulder/
Take this boulder...tie it to ya feet and jump off the cliff/
U think the definition of gaangsta...is listenin to Will Smith/
So remember me sayin about me 5 & you none/
Well i got de ja vu coz its about to happen again son/

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my vote goes to mad dog becuae he had a better verse......punches hit hard and everything and most important your shit rhymed

mind-you need to elevate and work on making your lines rhyme and shit.....none of your words rhymed......your verse was just a bunch of filler lines and talk......ELEVATE

v/mad dog

Uppin.............................................

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mad dog you killed him i didn't like fine minds very much cos it was boring to read, mad you had better punches n flowed well...

v/ mad dog...

p.s return the favour link in the sig...

*breakdown*

-fine mind-

flow- 4/10
punches- 5/10
structure- 3/10
rhymes- 4/10
total- 16/40

-mad dog-

flow- 6/10
punches- 7/10
structure- 7/10
rhymes- 8/10
total- 28/40

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ma vote definetly goes 2 mad dog he ripped fine mind good shyt guys

Flow:Mad dawg
Structure: mad dawg
Punches: mad dawg

Vote goes 2 mad dawg...Yo fine mind u need 2 elevate u didnt even rhyme in ur verse...go like ask somebody for help on how 2 rhyme iight ~1~

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