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Old 05-19-04, 04:13 PM   #1
ooooweeeeeeeeeeh
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Red face battle me n steddie eddie 2001 feedbak please

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rap battle holla @ steddie eddie if i ever meet wit him he gona get ripped


(o)yo eddie//
u reddi//
to get put to beddie//
we no u like from men slow n steddie//
in ya shed//
given hed//
look at u u no its da truth uya face goin red//
n u no no1 would even care if u was shot ded//
i like seein pussys mental//
man ur breath smeel ed take a dental//
biggin ur self up like u from south central//
bull shit u from hatfield u no it//
all rite ed dont burst ur clit//
wowow watch them fat tits//
yo calm down ill b bak in a bit im goin for a shit//
(oooooooooo)

(s.e)yo i give up.....JOKES//
row i aint like u i dnt choke(ooo)//
but i do huslte ma dope//
i saw u n ur mum sniffin coke//
is there any hope//
for priks like u//
bitch//
u jus a snitch//
n u fuckin no ur rich(harsh boi :mike//
i no u gettin nervous watchin ur eyes twitch//
i got style n rhymes//
boi u jus a theif comittin all deese crimes//
take this shit u no u need deese lines//
screw u im off//
n u wanna fite oo its bout to pop off//

end little play fite
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Old 05-20-04, 10:06 AM   #2
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what the hell is a steady eddie, ya rhymes was basic n ya flow was aight ya structure was ok but ya rhymes wasnt all that good work on it, it wasnt very bad it jus needs 2 be fixed up a lil much love 2 ya though
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Old 05-20-04, 11:28 AM   #3
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yea dats gd Row....to bad relationship cdnt be da same
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Old 06-02-04, 12:32 PM   #4
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im not feelin it it was way 2 choppy and i dunno jus wack elevate...............
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