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Old 05-19-04, 11:03 PM   #1
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somethin i jotted up.....

Convicted and tried for each moment my defeat was lied
They coincide to see the secrets my minds forced to hide
Rhymes a translation each word and letter my own creations
No armies or nations, jus plug my pen to ink in every station
Need to speak to attempt my feats, add to give my next defeat
Loyal to not attempt deceit, and unbending will unable to be beat
Battled but still unknown, strum my chords and set the tone
Hone each vocal bone in my body with pure ambition alone
S.W.A.T. down emcees like they wuz calling in the special forces
New dreams courses through nightmares, no time for pain or remorse’s
Slaughter’s seen with each life that careens into the point of my blade
Paid to use my words as my weapon to raid, with each word that fades
Another battle completed, determine the difference between winner and defeated
Ending’s more heated than the beginnin, each word counts verses heavily needed
Outcomes of each confrontation set stairways that elevate to my next state
When my words sedate, each destiny bound with different paths to change fate
The days when I’ll be revered with each word penetrating both the eyes and the ears
When my words translated they fears , become embodied by whatever words they hear
Make they cursed nightmares think they dreams compared to my words worst
Dayz when my words speak demons , finish with my last now my first.........
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Old 05-20-04, 05:37 AM   #2
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yo that shit was tight yo

was pretty deep and had a lot of feelin to it
u had a gud flow in it to which i liked

i give it a 7/10.
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Old 05-20-04, 09:31 AM   #3
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pretty hot shyt i thought ya lines where a lil long but nice spit i give it a 7/10 i would say work on cuttin down them lines a lil bit but thats about it........
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Old 05-23-04, 10:21 PM   #4
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tight cuz stay up
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