order and chaos reign supreme/
in my shards of mind the stangest seems/
entirely possible/
arch is like the new neo, bending the probable/
but call me MR morpheus/
cause im carving more fe us/
my minds working hard to decipher/
the codes of the vipers/
oppressors and aggressers/
tempted by my feminine caressors/
tempted even sampled but never ever droped my mantle/
of arch the shogun of the dark/
tryna make things right/
im the shogun of the dark but i fight to spread the light/
the epitany of epifanys/
constantly happens to me/
arch is R rated, too hot for TV/
all i see is corruption and glorification of sin/
what the f*ck is happenin?/
battymen baptized, taken as clergymen?/
what is the matrix? a film on a screen/
or tactics/
govermentals getting drastic/
tryna make their power stick/
take your pick/
the red pill or the blue/
only one reality`s true/
its on you, what the f*ck you do/

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i liked it. it was hot for a newcomer. you need to work on your flow and structure a little bit......but your talents promising. keep up the good work.

return the favor.......drop a response to my "elite league (my crhymies)" song. thanks. one.

s.v..............big bad c.s.

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Quote:

Originally Posted by Nick Fletcher. I don't drive an Eclipse, they're chickmobiles.

QUESTION: Is it even possible to improve upon perfection???
ANSWER: CRHYME SINDICATE



"I remember this one time I thought I was wrong........but I was mistaken." -Unknown




R.I.P. Jonathan "ONE MAN BAND/TERUMOTO" Nigro. Goodbye brother. God bless the dead. One love.

shit was dumb wack elevate the fuck up

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Holla at me when u stop writing rhymes wit dictionaries shit is dead

it was iight but it needs to go under some major elevation jus keep tryin 1 day u will def spit some hott shyt iight kid...........

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