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u check in and drop 1st...agree to terms or w/e


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Why I gotta spit 1st if u made da callout? I think u should be da one droppin 1st since u called me out ya know... Don't worry I'm only a newbee, I will prolly get ripped anywayz right... And I wont feed off ur verse if dat's what u worried about... Holla backk...

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^^^...ya sure...I make da rules in my thread...daz why...u drop 1st..take it or leave it...


Pz bro

U daughter is cute by the way...hehehe

Man, I peeped your battles, and you ALWAYS droppin 2nd on em. It's all gravy, I see your strategy. Fuckkit, I'll drop 1st. I'm leavin work right now, but I go str8 to my other job from here, so I'll log on there to drop ma verse...

G'luckk...

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^^^ lol..i don't always drop first...some are blind spits...and others I drop 2nd...but coo..


holla1..and LMAO@ u not bein able to find this thread to "check in", but finding my old battles...hahaa

Aiight dawg... I'm ready to roll...

G'luckk...

... And jus to let ya'll know, I am makin this win ABSOLUTELY UNDENIABLE jus to make sure da d/rs can't fake da funk in this mawfuckka...

*Comin Out Da Box Swingin!!!*

Reword ya ‘Verbage-Bitch’, U only like holdin’ mics coz it reminds u of ‘JERKIN-DICKKS’//
I’ll rip out ya EYES to EAT EM & Rip Out Ma GUTS coz ya “iN”-“SIGHT” aint WORTH-A-“SHIT”!!//

Eat a Dick<< To any nigga thinking you ‘Rip-Scripts’, ya spit is ‘Simplistic’//
He ‘Fixed-Wid-Lipstickk’ and couldn’t “SPIT” a “PUNCH” swingin both FISTS wid ‘WRISTS-SLIT’!!//

*Maaaan! I'm tellin u it's OVER! GAME FUCKKIN OVER!!*

I’l squash this Gay Prickk, & makin’ “SENSE” of sellin Brain is ‘Barely-An-OCCUPATION’// (cents)
‘Stop-Playin’, Ya Asshole’s “Filled With More MATES” than ‘AUSTRALIAN-CONVERSATIONS’!!!// KO!

Words ‘Join-&-Hit-Em’, I ‘Poison-Victims’, & like JADA u can’t AVOID-THE-“SMITH”n//
This ‘Boy’s-Trippin’ coz drinkin “CROWN” on empty Intestine’s da only time he got a ‘ROYAL-SICKKNESS’!!//

Make Newbs go 1st? ‘Thought-U-Was-Fast’! but ya verse is more TIRED than NARCOLEPTIC ‘INSOMNIACS’!//
I’ll Knockk Ya On Ya Ass wid OFFICE EQUIPMENT & u still couldn’t ‘DROP-THE-FAX’!!// (facts)

Tay ‘Spray-Rhymes’ & I’ll cut off ya LEFT arm so u can Spell Ya ‘Name-“RIGHT”’!//
No Games I ‘Take-Shine’ & he couldn’t SEE a “slice of the PIE” wid OPEN EYES in ‘CAKE-FIGHTS’!!!// KO!!!!

*MWAHAHAHAHAHAA!! FINISH HIM!!!*

Nigga, u couldn’t be “twice the MAN” wid SIAMESE ‘PARTS-&-ATTACHMENTS’!//
I’ll ‘Slaughter-This-Bastard’ wid PUNCHES dat “break more “CHINS”* than CHINESE ‘CAR-CRASHES’!!!//
(*CHIN is a popular Chinese name)

… Die slow Bitch…!

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"Play Da Game Nigga, Never Let Da Game Play You..."

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PLZ VOTE ON MY BATTLES!!

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dick.... i sued that siamese shit earlier in a battle wit bombz ...but it was in an entirely different way...but damn thas coincidence good luck to both emcees here that last verse was hot

muhahahaaa...**walks in..sees comp..dies laughing**

Aiyo,

First off,

How the fuck you gettin' votes speakin' jibberish..bitch, you are illiterate..-
Ur whole verse sounds ignorant..anyone who speaks English won't consider it..-
Faggot, u 'force shit' like ur constipated..you're constantly hated..-
Not because your plots are great..but because you're drops are played bitch..-
I laugh at you thinkin' your spit is epic..nigga, that shit is epileptic..-
Punches misfired without discretion..ur text can irritate a Torrets kid..-*
LICK SWEATY BALLS!!!!..see, I wreckon I'm wreckin' whatever you're reppin'..-
U stink like it's shit u stepped in..before this battle, u forgot to choose ur weapon..-
WTF!?! kid I'll rip you like 'junk mail'..toss you 'a 'side' like with a chicken dinner..-
Get 'off my dick' cuz I don't need to 'stress my point'..you will NOT be the winner..-
Look at 'Tay 'Dig' for his 'Groove Back'..thinkin' he 'The Best Man' with those sleuth raps..-**
U ain't 'bustin' those jus loose straps..all ur imagery is like you drew crap..-

FUCK OUTTA HUUUUUUUUUUUUUURRRR


**Shit is Personal Dawg..**


U fuckin' buggin' teachin' ur daughter..phonics when you can't even drop logic..-
Workin' two jobs?..ur 'lyin', just a..Siegfried and Roy prop bitch..-***
With a 'Trump'ed up battle record..does it even 'don' on you ur talent is wack..-****
I'll spit this verse to beats..the sound in the back is you dying on the track..-


Fuck outta huuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuur!






*Torrets is a condition which causes a person to have uncontrollable body twitches and verbal

outbursts
**Tay DIggs...actor played in How Stella Got her Groove Back and The Best Man
***He's from Las Vegas
****He claims to have an i-net battle record of 61-2 (hehehe)

Damn hott battle peeps but ima break it down.

Tay: Good punches and personals ok wordplay but u stretched most of your lines plus all them colours didnt help wit the verse...plus the structure was off (stretched lines 2 blame).

N-Sight: Dope verse amazin wordplay hard hittin wit the punches decent wordplay a lil strectched wit the lines but maintained a good structure u got this.

V/N-Sight

Vote disqualified for suspected d/r.

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FLOW & STRUCTURE
Straight up sight took this with ease man cuz i was definitely feelin his verse a lot more than i was feelin tay's. Tay ure lines were too stretched so ure structure was completely off and that fucked up ure flow to, but u did have a little flow. n-sight, u stretched ure lines to but not as much so u had a far better flow dawg. both y'all need to shorten ure lines and try to keep them the same length u know.
PUNCHES & PERSONALS
N-Sight took this cuz he came mad hard with his punches in this battle. the wordplay in ure spit was top playa, some of the best i've seen u do so far. Tay, u had some gud strong punches to but some weak ones to whilst N-Sight was consistent from start to finish. tay u had some ok wordplay but u weren't as strong as n-sight so i give this to him.

OVERALL
N-Sight basically just came harder from start to end. his punches were consistently strong and his wordplay was top form to. his structure was questionable but it managed to pull off giving him gud flow to his spit!!!

V/ - N-Sight

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tay won this battle because simply n sight his rhymed more and had better word play, better flow aswell. He ripped you up from the start of his lines and continued the process. He had the better overall performance even though your shit was pretty clse though. N sight you need to elevate on your rhymes despratly. Tay easerly had this one.
vote tay.

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yo yo yo, i am like tupac cuz of rhymez/
and lyrikaly i can beat-you-up-criminally//
i am a killer and you cant sway me/
because man brendas got a baby// (dope)
can u imagine me being less then the dopest man/~
hell no dawg, cuz im almost as dope as 50 cent man//

^^^ This vote is being DQ'ed


uppin for real votes

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Tayg Best Lines=I’l squash this Gay Prickk, & makin’ “SENSE” of sellin Brain is ‘Barely-An-OCCUPATION’// (cents)
‘Stop-Playin’, Ya Asshole’s “Filled With More MATES” than ‘AUSTRALIAN-CONVERSATIONS’!!!// KO!



N-SIGHTS Best Lines=
Ur whole verse sounds ignorant..anyone who speaks English won't consider it..-
I laugh at you thinkin' your spit is epic..nigga, that shit is epileptic..-\


PUNCHES=Tayg...Just Look At That Austlain 1 OMG!
FLOW=N-SIGHT....Flowed Alot Better Thans Taygs
WORDPLAY=Tayg...Wordplay Was Alot Better Than N-Sights
Stucture=N-Sights...Taygs Bars Didnt Flwo Of Each Other
Personals=N-Sight....Personals Where Stronger
Complex=Tayg....Punches Where More Complex

Vote=Tayg

Hot Battle Best I Seen For A Minute...Tay Gets It Becuase Them Punches Where Crazy

N-Sight....Work On Ya Punches,Multis And Complexity
Tayg...Work On Structure,Flow

Vote disqualified for suspected d/r.

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alright this battle was a lot closer then i thought it would be but here's how i broke it down:

n sight had a nice flow going with some nice vocab intertwined with it. his punches were alright but i wasn't really feelin the flow to it. there were dead spots in his verse.

tayg had nice punches n mad metaphors with multis. although most of his lines were streched he still made it flow together smoothly. his vocab was nice as well.

vote: tayg

Vote disqualified for suspected d/r.

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Are ya'll on Crack.
Tay G you had good verses but ya flow and structure sucked in my opinion. better personnals would suffice.
N-sight you had good multi syllable flow, punches landed but no personnals

Tay G-6/10
N-7/10 Return da favor in ma sig

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