Aight usual rules apply, ten to twenty lines lets go son

rapping is my pashion... when ur in my game your not even a fraction/
wat you battleing me for... this battle attempt is gonna be suicide/
like wrapp you up in clay more explosive... deternate you and blow you into fragments/
i'll push you underground like breaking your spinal cord to the limit/
collapse your whole body, like you've just had a lethal injection/
numbs you till your parolysed with red flaring eyes, i burst your eyes with a sharp spike/
i'll rip your tonsals out make sure you cannot talk for a year/
shouldn't you be thinking of early retirement... i mean you are in ur teens but act old enough/
past your self by date, you've gone off like a moldy cheese/
the smell is horrable... like your mums crusty feet/

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yo yo yo, i am like tupac cuz of rhymez/
and lyrikaly i can beat-you-up-criminally//
i am a killer and you cant sway me/
because man brendas got a baby// (dope)
can u imagine me being less then the dopest man/~
hell no dawg, cuz im almost as dope as 50 cent man//

First of all you little retard
learn to spell right
coz if you dont come correct
I'ma smack you with this mike
I been schooling young mc's in this rap thing from da start
you say hip hop is your passion, to me its my heart
shit, my lyrical styles vibrate through your soul
rip you up into shreds, turn your head into a hole
u might have been told you could ryhme
BUT YOUR MUM WAS LYING
Coz after I whip your pretty boy ass you gon to that bitch crying
take yo ugly ass and buck teeth from back-where-you came
coz ur diss is weak, and-phoney-as your name
Fine mind?
erm, I dont think so,
u still aint passed 5th grade, dumbass nigga, cant spell coolade
But still, my son, I think I'm gonna be kind,
u knew you was gonna lose, but at least you still tried
I still kick yo ass, and I ain't even trying
Give you a tip fine mind
....QUIT RHYMING

you would have to do 20 lines wouldn't you, even though u suck lol.

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yo yo yo, i am like tupac cuz of rhymez/
and lyrikaly i can beat-you-up-criminally//
i am a killer and you cant sway me/
because man brendas got a baby// (dope)
can u imagine me being less then the dopest man/~
hell no dawg, cuz im almost as dope as 50 cent man//

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aight battle punches were weak fo both but i gotta go wit fine mind he had aight flow

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=125921
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Ight,flow would have to go to Fine Mind in this one.Kre-Z,your flow was badly off.But punches were weak by both of you.But Fine Mind...those punches were some of the worst I've ever seen since I started.I gotta give this to Kre-Z although his were weak as well.

Vote-Kre-Z

Aiight both were some whack Lines. Kre-z had a few punches that were close to landing while fine mind couldn't hit this kid at all. ELevat the fuck out and get some Personnals

Vote-Kre-z

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Hit up my my battle aight

Aight, first off I think both of yall need to elevate. Yall both had the flow going...you just gotta work on your vocab (especially fine mind) With that said Im gonna have to give this one to Kre-Z. He had a much better vocab which made his flow alot better. Fine-Mind, you just need to work on your punches a little bit and I think youll be alright.

I been schooling young mc's in this rap thing from da start
you say hip hop is your passion, to me its my heart
^^^BEST LINE^^^

One for Kre-Z

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ok i gota go wit krez because his verse jus kept me readin they were both good but i think krez sounded like it came off the top of his head but u both were good so keep it goin

v/krez

YO DIS WAS AN WEAK ASS BATTLE BUT I HAVE TO GIVE IT TO Kre-Z CUZ HE HAD PERSONALS AND PUNCHES WHEN U HAVE DEM 2 COMBINED U MURDER YO OPPENENT

FINE MINE WORK ON YO SPELLING AND HIT HARD NEXT TIME CUZ DAT WHOLE VERSE WAS PLAYED OUT FO REAL SO WORK ON DAT

VOTE=KRE-Z

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