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Old 05-22-04, 10:09 PM   #1
E Looch
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Looch vs XxToXiCXxVeRbZ

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10 line blind spit

due in 25 minutes or its a dq

house rules no crew or dr ya know

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Old 05-22-04, 10:15 PM   #2
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O Checkity Check Lets Get Dis Thing Poppin
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Old 05-22-04, 10:37 PM   #3
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Im Breakin Ya Throat Ya Spits Havent Elevated Ya Just Fakin Ya Growth
Like Friends Signing On His Cast I Got ToXiC VeRbZ Takin Foot Notes
Like Pregnant Women Standin Outside Abortion Clinics My Lines Are Hated
Dude Is A Calendar Going Out Wit Digits His Numbers Are Dated
Destroy His Pep,Ya Rhymes Like Centimeter Deep Seas No 1 Feels Its Depth
Kill Ya Rep,Clock Ya Death An Cut Ya Legs Put It In Time So U Watch Ya Step
Son U Ill? Hell Thats Like Sayin Satanic Writins In Eden Ya Scripts Will Never Reign
Son I'll Inject Ya Own Cereal In Ya Arms So U Know That Ya Lifes In Vein
His Sexuality Is Like Question Marks Thinkin & Drivin He Really Not Sure Which Way To Go
Like Condoms Wit Lungs His Raps Are Known To Suck An Bl0w




an for the slow minded cereal is not the kind that u eat.. its like life
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Old 05-22-04, 10:37 PM   #4
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Datz Mah BOY CHEA!!!!!!! ^^^^ ^^^^ ^^^^ ^^^^


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Old 05-22-04, 10:43 PM   #5
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wow times up kid went past 25 already
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Old 05-22-04, 10:46 PM   #6
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O Hell Naw Fuck Dat

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Old 05-22-04, 10:49 PM   #7
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PLEASE-WHORE, i'm beating you with MEAN-GORE to get ur SPLEEN-SORE, and nigga you could never have ill writtens so stop stressin ya KEY-BOARD!!// (1)

I'm stealing ya GREEN-DORK, and leaving a track of 'red' after fukkin with this G's-CORPSE//...lol...(2)

Ur bodies malfuntioning cause I'm pissing on his GENE-CORE, my textual virus is infectin ya SCREEN-MOOR* you think you can handle this 'battle', but bitch i BRING-WAR!!//...WHOA (3)


I'm PASSIN-CLIPS-IN-THIS-FUED, to TRASH-THIS-BITCH-AND-HIS-VIEWS, I'm THRASHIN-AND-RIPPIN-THIS-SHREWD, with barbaric SCRIPTS-ON-KIDS-DUDE!!// (4)
I got the BITE-TO-STRIKE-FRIGHT-WHEN-I-FIGHT-AND-SMITE-LIKE-RAGING-DOGFIGHTS, it's what I WRITE-THAT-LIGHTS-DESPITE the fact I-LIKE-BLAZING-DUDES-ON-SITE, Ur LIKE-CHRIST-CAUSE-UR-MIGHTS-HYPED, fans watch as my TIGHT-TYPE-INGNITES-ERASING-UR-COLD-WRITTENS cause dawg in the heat of the moment I'm the one to ROAST-BITCHES!!// (5) DEM MULTI'S HOT!

when will i decide-to-stop??when i apply-some-locks to a side-of-rocks; drop his brain on his casket and deny-his-thoughts//---now thats "thinkin" outside the "box"!!!~(lol)~ (5)

stop-ya-breathin when i block-ya-throat-region with lots-of-semen then drop-his-reasons he couldnt "cum" evil if was gettin sucked on his cock-from-a-demon!!!~(lol)~(6)

im gonna blind side ya and take a sledge hammer to ur knee,
rolling round the floor in serious pain and agony,
can u see me, hell i bet u still even wanna be me,
cut down the middle of your face give you a split personality,(7)

can u walk looch, or shit can u even talk,
i think your done, best stick something in him like a fork,
or a knife, dont ya know ill take ur life, put a pick axe in ya head with a fatal strike,(8)

this aint no actin, im like Julius Ceaser ;with the thumb down instead of two up i refuse to please ya; then execute and induce ya head in a noose, grenades strapped to ya beamer *BOOM!* left with a lethal dose of amnesia in a siezure!!! (9)

Hope you like the CHEST-SCARS-YOU-CLIT
I can beat u, without using the BEST-BARS-I-SPIT
and this must be ur number 1 battle, cuz tha REST-ARE-JUST-SHIT!!// (10)
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Old 05-22-04, 10:51 PM   #8
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wtf is that shit is way past 10 lines
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Old 05-22-04, 10:53 PM   #9
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Nigga My Lines Are Stretch
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Old 05-22-04, 11:12 PM   #10
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Looch:

Basic, U didnt put alot of efford into this but i have to say you had betta punches and your structure was easier to read some personals could be betta. Elevate.

Tox:

Streeeeeeeeeeeeeetched as fuck your punches were forced, some were aight, u had betta rhyme sheme but damn do something about that structure.....Elevate.


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Old 05-22-04, 11:35 PM   #11
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E Looch - damn good spit...seen better from you....but ur meta's are my fav parts of your verses....they are very creative....good punches in here....no personals so work on that....awesome meta's....ur last two bars were fuckin insane....but a lil bit over mediocre verse from you....give it a 7/10....

Toxic - okay...well first off....ur shit was stretched....fix that....ur structure is horrible...hot multi's....but they dont win the battles....only a couple good punches....nice closer....but ur verse was so stretched....give it a 4/10.....fix ya structure man....

These two bars killed it :
Son U Ill? Hell Thats Like Sayin Satanic Writins In Eden Ya Scripts Will Never Reign
Son I'll Inject Ya Own Cereal In Ya Arms So U Know That Ya Lifes In Vein
His Sexuality Is Like Question Marks Thinkin & Drivin He Really Not Sure Which Way To Go
Like Condoms Wit Lungs His Raps Are Known To Suck An Bl0w

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Old 05-23-04, 02:54 PM   #12
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^ yea didnt try to hard


VOTE DAMN IT
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Old 05-23-04, 06:36 PM   #13
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I Said Vote Bitchs Dont Ask Mr To Vote On Your Shit No More
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Old 05-23-04, 08:38 PM   #14
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toxic...u concentrated WAYYYYYYYY too much on multies......n they were extremely forced..to the point where some didnt make sense,or if it did it was way out there......u needa concentrate on punches more.......a whole lot more......

looch...damn,liked all ur punches except ur closing line.....my fave line was the foot notes one .....good shit......u got some very clever original punches son........

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Old 05-23-04, 09:25 PM   #15
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Toxic:...Nice Verse! But your multi's wasn't on POINT! Your Punchez was hot but not comapred to the hottest I've Seen out of you dawg! You need to Concentrate on your punches & be more creavtive with your ryhme sheme. But Keep Working Dawg!

Looch:..HoT Verse! Your Multi's was crazy hot! I was feeling your lyrics more & you had better ryhme scene! Your punces was crazy but ur closers need fixin dawg! Also you was very personal!


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