DIS SOME I JUST WROTE UP HOPE U LIKE FEED BACK PLZ

THE war IN iraq CAUSES FERROCIOUS attacks ON THE coalition FORCES occupied THERE from INSURGENTS with GATS//
THEYVE learned TO ADAPT some of THEM mental FROM the STRESS, BUSH should SEND them HOME and LET them GET there REST//
IT's A SAd SITUATION, anxious ANTICIPATION, THE VIBES of YOUR NERVES is AN EXPECTANCY of AMPUTATION//ouch!
REBUILDING of IRAQ almost seems IMPOSSIBLE but gods WILL is IN inflicted and THEN we ARE unstoppable!//
PULL the PLUG on the SHITTE clerics, BUST them in they JAW and BREAK allah's SPIRIT//
Iraq WILL never BE the same YOUNG boys DYING left and RIGHT, SADAAM hussein YOU know isnt the evil thats in SITE//
WE got HIM out of THE way and WE still gotta PAY and our SOLDIERS die every single day//
WHEN will the blood stop flowing AND our missiles KEEP on rolling HITTING targets WITH GPS WERE so CONTROLLING//
NOT even KNOWING the TENSION that will AWAKEN the MUSLIMS, PRAY for UNJUST ONES not stable to OUR sons and THANK god for da GUNZ//
WE'll bombard THERE desert with TANKS and ARTILLERY and SHOW them the REALITY of what we DO with CHIVALRY//
ROYAL as we SAY we ARE, PRAY to GOD and for the CAUSE, WE will strenghten OUR men TO preserve the DROPPING bombs//
THANK the LORD for THE brains AND the GUNS so we can SLAY these beings THAt fly planes into our LUNGS!//
IRAQ can TAKE our LIVES but NEVER our freedom, AND i wont FIGHT them without MY "desert Eagle"//
NICHOLAS berg will be AVENGED at once, A 21 YEAR old CONTRACTOR MISTAKEN for a "GRUNT"//
MUSLIMS in NAJAF WATCH our WEAPONS to see ANY flaws IN our HEAVENLY essence//
NO doubt FOR me that THEY will JUST keep fighting, and THE end will be A NUCLEAR attrocity! oops//


HERES ANOTHA ONE I WROTE LIKE LAST WEEK BUT I PROOF READ IT AND IT BECAME DA ONE ^^^^^^^^^ THERE SO WHICH IS BETTA DA TOP OR DA BOTTOM



the war in iqaq is sworn to be graphic//
but sadaam huseein isnt running the traffic//
americans do what we wanna do and speak our minds//
watch our back as well as our behinds//
we fight till the death until theres a cave in our chest//
the way that we rest is insane when we protest//
i got guns like the infantry that our rapid//
the war in iraq shouldnt of never happened//
im glad that im not there cuz id probably die//
trying to fight but couldnt keep up with the shitte//
The muslims i love em cuz there people to//
but what they did to us sticks just like glue//
im anxious for bloodshed and wanna see justice//
i run up and rush kids in iraq with a Club kid!~//
I call this meeting at headquarters and its grand//
we kill any thing in iraq or afghAnistan//
we fight for our right and our right is being threatened//
these beligerent pests that dont match up with my rep//

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IAM BACK FUCKAH'Z HELL~! NEVA LOOKED SO GOOD

pretty siik yo big up yo wun keep doin ya damn thang///////

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yo toxic...ups yo...keep doin your thing...true reality bro...

thanks KEEP BRINGING DEM FEEDBACKS// KEEP BRINGIN DEM

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Yo toxic. Big ups man!! I'm a soldier in the 82nd Airborne Division and i just got back from iraq in April and Im goin back again in July. What you wrote is reality kid. Its nuts out there and people need to understand that. Good visuals. One

i like this cause it talks about some real hardcore subject.keep up your good work.i couls actually imagine it and it was eral emotional.

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The Definition. period.

damn toxic...u came all out hard core on this piece...
this was some all right shit keep at it son....

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Yea Danx Keep Bringin Dem Feed Backs

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IAM BACK FUCKAH'Z HELL~! NEVA LOOKED SO GOOD

thAT was tright man

Yea Danx Keep Bringing Dem Feed Backs I Want All Yall Opinions Keep Bringing It

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That Shit was Sikk and true i realli felt ya on the part u siad somehting like shouldint the Soilders get a Rest the shit was Tru There Some feed back well this is nice ^^^ i liked that


Can u give me some feed back in Next Genaration PLEase

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Free Agent

damn that shit was deep homy

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Thatz it Wrenegade u gotta make more sence wit yo Feed Back SHIT iight 1

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Like what i Said i like his shit War on 2004 what ever u felt da most Explain it down XxToXiCXxVeRbZ SoRrY FoR FrEePoStInG My BaD HoMiE

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oh im sorry was that too confusing for you? i thought i made sense to me.... ok let me break it down for you so you know how im feeling about someone elses verse...
i liked it.... cuz that shit was good...i would read it again but i dont really feel like it....ummm not much else to say so i will ramble on about some bullshit and finish it up with a ..good job on tha fuckin verse!

does that make sense?

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