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Aight Kid....do The Damn Thang

So you must be friendly then huh Mister nyce1?
Just one of my lines can beat your rhymes twice son.
You uglier then the people on "The Swan"
makes sence though, cuz half of them from the Babylon
You tell me to do the damn thing, who are you my boss?
You spit shit so clean ya teeth... here's the floss
Like a coin toss you're outcome unpredictable
you're rhymes are weak, shit I call them flickable
So take some notes from me, I get all my votes for free
My rapper and nickname is Oats, the hottest MC.

Even if I eat OATS I won’t be filled by this appetizer
The real entrée is the vets, you’re just the free water
My potential will make you tremble, more than a natural disasta
You’re more L.......inked to L’s, than terrorist are to Al Qaeda
I spit FIRE at HOSE (HOES)yo, so just try and put me out
The only hotness you spit, is when OATmeal is comin out ya mouth
This kid spit so sick Canada dubbed him MC Toronto
but he got tired of that name, so he just transferred SARS to Ontario
You couldn’t test me if I was an experimental tube baby
Your rhymes aren’t worth EXAMINING, while I’m the SAT
Let me tell you what probability you have, of being an emcee
About as much as Lisa Lopez using her “Left Eye” to see the deceased

UPPIN for some votes keep it real wit explanations UPPITTY UP

Uppon For Votes...yo Lets Get Some Honest Feed Up In Here

Come on yall we need some votes up in this peace UP

close battle both need to elevate but i give it to nyce1 made m ore sense and oats it doesnt rreally make sense wen u use personals cuz im sure every1 dont kno him

Damn will someone vote on this mug...trying to get this thing done with

Yo smartzz good lookin on the vote but you're not qualified kid..you need at least 20 posts to vote on most battles

okay

oats..........your verse lacked umm everything expect structure that was about the only thing you had on him........i like that you tryed to use some personals because i personally like using personals but noone uses them on this site....thats why i been on the Orignal RB for 5 years......but yeah you need to elevate and work on your punches and how your word shit

nyce1........you really need to work on your structure......dont put smiley faces in your shit because it is really NEWBISH and looks stupid.........when you do that it throws off you flow and you wont get any votes.......but im giving this one to you because i felt that your punches was better them him.....but you need to work on making the ending of your bars rhyme

BOTH NEED TO ELEVATE ALOT

v/nyce1

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Nyce1 nice endin dawg. i really liek your verse. nice punches, persoanls and structure. you verse was together. i wanna battle you when you step your record up. but other than that you killed this dude.

vote=Nyce1

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well oats you came very weak I didn't like anything about your drop
especially your punches.....Nyce1 you take this battle easily because
I like you punches & everything else more than Oats

my vote goes to: Nyce1

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This was weak. Just plain weak. Nyce 1 gets my vote for this as he was the least weak. HE had some punches, the best being "Even if I eat OATS I won’t be filled by this appetizer
The real entrée is the vets, you’re just the free water"
Oats you're shit was so wack I couldn't tell which was the crappest

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yo Nyce clearly had harder punches and more creativity..better opener and closer
Vote: Nyce vote on my shit please http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=125654