These are my weather poems I made. Tell me what you think and how I could improve, thanks boyz.


Digital Liquid

Emotion as we see in our eyes, we cry
Puffy white clouds as we see, fill the sky
Friends they are, enimies they're not
Feeding vegetation with every droplet they got

Rain falls to soak the vibrant green
Melting over the lush biotic things
The forest is an invisible town of many
Holding Earths wonderful beings of plenty

Plants and animals took as much as they need
No need to waste what will always be, no greed
So different from computers, but so alike
Running cruicial cycles, night after night

Unaccountable beads of rain, no less to see
That precipitation is a nesscecity
Humans suicidal toxins we rid
Lets dilute them with digital liquid




Reaction

The silence of the warm damp night
Mixed with raging explosions and light
Ten minute intervals of violent down pours
Chaotic bolts of light exerting loud roars

Friends at dawn, foe at dusk
Fight with extensive power they must
Overwhelming power clashes uplift
Positive and negative charges sift

Innocent beings crushed by electricity
Spilling light over Earth to show insanity
Erode the dirt and feed the trees
Burn the wood and feel the breeze

Two brilliant armies have it hand to hand
To battle to the end, see who stands
But when they clash equally both serve satisfaction
That natures polarity has come to a reaction


Roar

Time to leave, get out of town
Heard everyone, now no sound
Broadcasted locally, was a warning
Now I can see, wind is swarming

From a wispy breeze to a breath-taking roar
The demons rise to take some more
The hurricane was summoned to take the crown
To turn this populated urban to a ghost town

Floating happily over us all
Looking beyond to vision us small
The "eye" so large which lears in our soul
Choosing the weak to take the toll

Genocide from a more powerful perspective
Is more often natural, then a commander's insentive
The devils fury has chosen to retreat
And move the front lines to another street...

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Hale-D movin to tha top...