The light is fading now, the darkness shall prevail
The razor cuts so lightly, the soul goes up for sale.
The pain just lasts for seconds, relief is just like bliss
How can you listen to a twisted tale, one such as this.

The night time doesn't scare me, the daytime holds no lies
I hear the happy people and I hear their happy cries.
They warned me not to do it, They warned me not to try
They told me not to bother, They said that I would die.

But that's the point of this, to tell the final truth
To know the sky above me, I never had the proof.
You may not like the subject, You may not like the it told
I will stay forever young, I will never grow so old.

Do you really know me? Do you really care?
Can you really see me? See my vacanct stare?
And as I lie here bleeding, I'm glad you didn't cry
But you will never know how much that I wanted to die.

Dont die homie, live a long life...

prozac works, try it

open your spiritual eyes, and look past the grey
get on your knees, close your natural eyes and pray
Tough times are only for a short while, they don't last always
Have you ever seen it rain for more than 14 days?

Think about it for a moment, just when the storm is at worst
that's when the sun clears the clouds, and rays begin to burst
cause nothing dark can remain, when light permeates through
there's a message in this poem, written especially for you

cause I don't have to know you to hear your weak, faint cry
here take this poetic tissue, and wipe the tears from your eye
cause slitting a wrist condemns a life to eternal fire and damnation
although your soul was purchased for a price, forclosure voids compensation

if you understand the words I speak, then you can hear my heart
speaking life to a cycotic soul, looming in the dark...
there is a savior who will wipe your tears, calm your fears, and is open to hear
if you don't know Him, JESUS is His name...call him now...and HE will draw near

woah, that kicked ass... I wrote "I want to die" many years ago when I really did feel like that. I just thought that I should start sharing the stuff I've wrote.

very well done both of you!!! return the favor please. http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=126385

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