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ight..here's my check in ppl!!!i jst got home from skewl boy!!jst chill and wait!!!hahaha..i bet you pre-wrote huh!!!hahaha

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U ain't gonna spit so imma jst spit real quick!!!!!

This nigga beatin me? na he can't cuz he's "TOONICE"//
Shyt I could still kill him even if i used only two lines//
Damn!!
this nigga rhymes like a real pure white men//
Cuz a real emcee gets sex from women, not from there right hand//
So stop bull shittin around, wit emcees that's jst mad and ill//
Ur nothin compared to us ppl cuz u jst lack da skill//
Yo!!!don't try ta be good cuz ur not close ta bein a musician//
With out tryin i'll ruin ur rep and your whole eye condition//

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yo yo check it....this slow ass nigga talkin that hot garabage//when i put two hollowtips in atmosphere i'll have his ass gasping for air like a drowning patient//why should this lil boi talk bout how nice i am when he know i'm takin all his bitches and lettin him taste my babies//after i get finish spit i'll have ya bitch ass lookin like an albino country singer wit scabbies//my flow is like a streetsweapa puttin niggas like u in they grave for fukin wit a real G// cuz when i let them hollopwtip hit u i'll have u runnin around like jae millz say no no no//U tryin 2 see me in da battle rip ya body in half dismantle ya dome and leave ya bitch ass dyin at home//

uppin for votes get this thing ova wit holla back.

quick 6 lines of mine!!!!

shut up!!you ain't a "G", cuz u talk more like da innocent//
na fuck dat, i can't understand you, u more like a imagrant//
right at dis very moment i wonder why u wasted my time??//
Cuz i wasted my lines on a nigga dat cant' even rhyme//
Shyt!!!jst leave da RB, cuz u nothin more den dirt//
If you were, u'd be sold at a one dollar store cuz dats all u really worth//

for reealz...dats all truth up there^^^^^^

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ok lets see atmo gets this vote becuase. he had more rhyming and his flow was way much better. and his closure put it all away.
check out this battle so it can close 2.
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127382

uppin plz

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atmosphere gets my vote coz he had beta wordplay
beta creativity to his punches.............structure n flow were ok 2

toonice u lost coz ur structure woz weak....hard to follow flow,u had weak simple punches that didnt hit...........keep elevatin

vote-atmosphere

uppin diz..jst won vote den i win

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I give this to ATMOSPHERE because she had better flow, punches and structure. toonice your verse really didn't rhyme that good and it was hard as shit to read. You need to break up your verse more.

Vote ATMOSPHERE

drop a vote on my battle
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128004

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READY FOR WAR

CHECK THIS OUT IN OPEN MIC...NEED FEEDBACK
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135097

LETS GO!!!!!!!!!!

i know dis shit iz ova cuz he cheated but fuckin toonice suck sorry ass bitch damn he got merked

atmosphere won thats all you need to know cause this fool is a lil cheatin basterd and he sucks ass