lets go 2nd round

10 lines
45 mins to spit after check in
no d/r cv or biting
good luck

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KiLlAh BwOy

aiight my bad...Im at work...had to do some shit...


Checkin
Round 2**ding Ding**

Size up this chump,cock back tha pump,he paraplegic,he can's stand this
Still lickin his wounds from last time I had him layin on tha canvas
still aint elevated yet....this cats needs major construction
Thought he had a hot crew...ended up wit self destruction!
viciouslessy Ill kill this bitch-to-be
He spits feces...get it?He means shit to me
Killah Bwoy spellin his name like 100 percent jamacian
Til he posted hs pic...we all see this nigga 100 percent fakin
son scared to post against me cause win plus I add a lesson
Killah Boi scared to grow...his punchlines fear adolescence

Theres my 10 lines fam

** self destruction in reference to his crew Lyrical Destruction

lol oh no you dont want it like that patna lets go..uh

Only Reason U Won Last Time Was Cause Nas GhostWrote Your Shit-
Even If You Threw Ur Cd At Jay-Z Ur Record Still Couldn't Be A Hit-
Actin' Like You Big..You Know Chryme Sindicate Didn't Want You-
Held Enygma's Fam For Randsom..he had to let him in the crew-
Dun Leave Ur Rhymes Layin Round Cause Blacks "All Up In Your Crib"-
Jackin' Lines From Your Computer table Eatin ur left-over spear ribs-
Anerexic Nigga In Tights Runnin Around Claimin' He Black Thief-
He Really Has A 99% Average In School..Dudes Jus' A Black Geek-
Everyone Dick Ridin Your Shit Got Banned Let Me See You Win Now-
Get Back To Ur Regular Job..Knittin Me Hats In Your Pink Night Gown-


No More Nigga..NO MORE

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KiLlAh BwOy

Upping!upping!votes Please!

and the line
Dun Leave Ur Rhymes Layin Round Cause Blacks "All Up In Your Crib"-

his av said all up in ya crib and he changed it muwahahah good luck playa

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KiLlAh BwOy

lol...who me?yeah uppin for votes...

Killah stop swaying.......................................

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what the hell does that mean ^ LOL.....................

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Size up this chump,cock back tha pump,he paraplegic,he can's stand this
Still lickin his wounds from last time I had him layin on tha canvas
decent personal, not an amazing opener though.
still aint elevated yet....this cats needs major construction
Thought he had a hot crew...ended up wit self destruction!
this is decent but its not a great reference to his crew lyrical destruction, especially when theres a cat runnin around on these boards with the name self destruction
viciouslessy Ill kill this bitch-to-be
He spits feces...get it?He means shit to me
Decent wordplay, but ur structure is off now..
Killah Bwoy spellin his name like 100 percent jamacian
Til he posted hs pic...we all see this nigga 100 percent fakin
this was a good punch, i giggled
son scared to post against me cause win plus I add a lesson
Killah Boi scared to grow...his punchlines fear adolescence
this closer was iight, decent wordplay, this verse was nothing spectacular nor the best I've seen you spit, but it was better than most the crap you read on here- props.

Killa
Only Reason U Won Last Time Was Cause Nas GhostWrote Your Shit-
Even If You Threw Ur Cd At Jay-Z Ur Record Still Couldn't Be A Hit-
weak opener, i wasn't really feelin it.
Actin' Like You Big..You Know Chryme Sindicate Didn't Want You-
Held Enygma's Fam For Randsom..he had to let him in the crew-
Didn't really feel this punch, however it was personal so that should be takin into consideration.
Dun Leave Ur Rhymes Layin Round Cause Blacks "All Up In Your Crib"-
Jackin' Lines From Your Computer table Eatin ur left-over spear ribs-
Not really feelin this punchline, but the first line was a good setup
Anerexic Nigga In Tights Runnin Around Claimin' He Black Thief-
He Really Has A 99% Average In School..Dudes Jus' A Black Geek-
This made me chuckle, good play on his name strong setup...i like it.
Everyone Dick Ridin Your Shit Got Banned Let Me See You Win Now-
Get Back To Ur Regular Job..Knittin Me Hats In Your Pink Night Gown-
I flowed this verse without sayin the word "Night" and it was a nice multi, and made the punch hit stronger for me... decent closer but nothing spectacular either...

Ima have to say this was a pretty close battle, I liked a couple of Blacks bars and I liked a Bar or Two of Killah's, I think in terms of personal references you tie, in form of punches you tie, in form of wordplay you tie, in form of structure I give it to Killah Bwoy, Flows pretty close too so Ima give to Killah by about three tenths of a percent.. good battle yall stay up.

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=125461

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i'm feelin killa's shit. so my vote killa. but i cant vote. theres no poll. lata!

I thought this was a tight battle both peeps put in a decent verse props to ya 1st off.

Black Thief:
U had a good verse i thought i werent gonna feel it at first coz of the structure but i enjoyed readin it nice to flow wit and hard hittin punches decent opener and closer.

Killah Bwoy:
Again another good verse well retaliated decent punches personals ok structure and good wordplay used by ya decent opener and closer.

V/damn its hard coz it was a close battle but ima vote Black Thief nice battle though keep it up

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i thought kiilla got thiz puches hit harder it waz an iight battle

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word fuck i coulda had couple votes oh welll .......uppin

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