Enter the Arch:
uh oh!, its time for the arch to spit/
just cos i be low key dont mean you hoes can forget/
i battle MC`s frequently/
this morning i ate 3/
i aint a spice girl but everyones a Wannabe/
me?, i wannabe the next baby daddy to Mel B/
or maybe arch`ll go he picking and find me Halle berry/
enough about h0e sh*t i can get em any time/
don`t confuse my pimp for punk and we can be just fine/
im from up north but round here we dirtier than the south/
thats why theres plenty girls round here who keep arch up in they mouth/
im tryna expand minds and not just a n*ggaz ego/
but some n*ggaz dont compute like my name was C3P0/
what i R2 do to you with leave you left han solo/
then show you shoalin wrath like you was fighting against bolo/
im a one man war and thats exactly what you saw/
lets hope you forget quick though cos im about to get raw/
i dont like leaving witnesses unless its in a ditch/
and i get truly mediEVIL when i find me a snitch/
kill you softly but arch aint known to be a fugee/
i`d rather string you up just for saying you knew me/
im erratic have you breathin like an asmatic/
i beat you down in surgeon gloves thats made out of elastic/
no DNA so you know i wont need to go away/
and if you ever try to creep? well that`ll just make my day/
only niggaz i bus for?/
Nate, Tank and blazin/
only girl i trust?/
well thats my girl rage man/
darksiders be my family forever/
going agains us? thats the opposite of clever!/

arch out

Natetradamus:

It`s da Dark team causin` wrecks and collisions/
you *bleep*es, we turn to cinder on you left-overs from dinner/
I`m goin` Mach 5.. like a jet.. goin` full blast /
A sonic boom when I blaze makin` the victims an aftermath,/
in the past...stacked full, suited up and ready/
I cut their insides out with sharp rhymes, like a machetti/
I keep it steady with my lyrical beam, it`s a one hitta quitta/
made them *bleep*es, now they sing soprano when they once were tenors/
I`m sinista, Imma straight wreckin` Texan administa/
They got no formula to figure me out, so I`m just labeled an enigma/
To sum it up Imma Sigma.. the sum of what you hatas hate/
but it is what is.. you can`t fu(k with Nate the Great/
You gotta taste from Lt Stomp- a- Trick and that big body Tank/
Now it`s time for a dosage from the bomber to end your fate/
Ain`t nowhere for you to hide the darkness seeps through walls/
and we taken` over this here, we bosses, we make laws/
Too bad for all you *bleep*es who are scared of the dark/
Cause our reign here is forever, and this sh!t is the start/

*hook*

-after tha hook-

*Tanker Steps Back On Tha Stage*
back again like a flu, coming out in tha winter/Tanker AKA Gemini wit Darksiderz, guareented be a winner/
we aint stoppin,we like trains wit steel grills/
mad at Tanker cuz lethal lyrics,don left u azz killed/lets get real,Tanker runnin deep wit tha hardest team/Blaze,Nate,Arch,Max,and Rage aint afraid to blast out beam/mayne im on a mic,wreckin booths like highway caution/sit back wit style thats to crunk,it clears sickness before you start coughin/cant be beat im a man,wit some shyt shyt to say/pulled tha chrome out,but no gun and it was no ak/i had tha chrome bat wit tha dents marks from pass victims/left my sign all on your dome,my bad for your endefinate case of down syndromes...

Gemini AKA Tanker

*Hook*

hook-
Who dat creepin in da shadows at night/
(darksiderz, darksiderz)
who got you shakin like ali after a fight/
(darksiderz, darksiderz)

Blazin
It`s da darkside wit a shock and attachin like some crocks/and ridin on da land to see what you haterz got/ballin every single day and the hottest in GA/our bullets will soak up in you like butter called parkay/excuse me for my antics that will also make you panic/or like the titanic that was lost in the pacific or the atlantic/nate will make yo skull toute more then the barrel or the scope/while archie make that red coat of fecail mater explode and float/wit sos and max meltin everything in you mind right down to yo crack/and mzRage sendin marty mcfly`s future right to the back/the we got this beat rollin all up in ya streets/ cuz we show nothin but love like them boy the 5 heartbeats/ wit darksiderz rollin just so deep/you bet not sleep or we`ll start quanium leep/then cut off yo feet and fallin something steep/WE AIGHT TLC CUZ WE BLAST WHEN WE CREEP/

hook-
Who dat creepin in da shadows at night/
(darksiderz, darksiderz)
who got you shakin like ali after a fight/
(darksiderz, darksiderz)

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it was iight i was feelin it but it was kinda long and certain parts were choppy but it wasnt bad at all 7/10...yo can u hit up this battle and i can return the favor

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=125521

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It wuz good but I agree wit Insane16 on the too long part!!Keep spitin cause all u could do is get better!!!!

Ya forreal, i was like'n it, but I wasnt tryn to read the whole thing, to long, and I hate fuck'n readn, u kno wut im sayn? keep write'n, Peace

yeah thats the work of a few pepes though i only personally wrote the 1st verse.
gimme some feedback on that part specifically cos thats the bit that IM resposible for!
thanks for the feedback though, keep it coming
Peace

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well as for that specific part it was pretty good but like i said be4 u need to elevate iigt good luck kid.............

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thanx insane, appreciate the feedback!

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