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Bored On Rb At 12 On The Eastcoast/
U Can See The Aggrivation Towards The Members In Each Post/ Niggas Think They Get Away Wit Shyt, But Wut Im Speculatin/ A Plot On If I Should Make Killer Reservations/ Fuck U, Fuck Him, Fuck Every Last One Of These Racist/ Fuck Republicans, Florida, And Bush For Fuckin Up My Nation/ Fuck Ppl That Throw Away They Life, Even Tho They Have Talents, And Have Blessings/ Fuck The Government For Unrightfully Puttin A Man In The Facility Of Correction/ Fuck A Snitch On A Streets But That Helpin Put His Mans In The Pen/ Fuck A Notepad This Is Off The Top Fuck A Pen/ Fuck A Nigga Who Claim He All The Way Real, But Jus Pretend/ Fuck A Nigga That Will Take The Ice Pick, But Not The One Wit The Red Dot And The Lens/ Cuz When He Get Deep Down In The Bottom Of His Skin/ U Will Come To Find Out He Was A Pussy From Beginning To End/ And He Was Never A Rider, He Jus Lived Off Ya Tales/ Cuz When Shyt Go Down Hes Gonna Be Runnin Wit His Legs Coverin His Tail/ And Then U'll Come To Find The Dude That Was Runnin Wit U/ Is Now Rollin Wit The Town New Most Notorious Crew/ Fuck Bush Jus Draftin Innocent Ppl, So Random/ While He Has A Great Time Chillin In His 10000+ Square Foot Mansion/ And Its A Shame At One Point Iraq Is A Country We Relied On A Stood By/ Now Bush Is Warrin Wit Em, And Ppl Startin To Think Saddaam Is The Good Guy/ Now Nothings Wrong Wit Takin Pictures Of Iraqis Stripped Naked/ But Its Wrong When The Ppl We Did That Too Has One Of Ours Decapitated/ Bullshyt, I Dont Wanna Here That Garbage No More/ Cuz If Anybody Is Thinkin, We All Kno Its Fare In Love And War/ U May Think Im Talkin Out My Ass, But Yall Gotta Listen/ Would This Wouldve Happened If We Minded Our Own Business/ Would This Wouldve Happened If The Americans Wouldnt Have Mad That Entrance/ Or If We Jus Got Our Oil And This And Ignored The Government, Had No Interest/ ???
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(00)O=(00) <-- I will knock you the fuck out........
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IP:
its iight i wasnt feelin it to much i think it needs more work on its flow and all............................
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IP:
I Kno
The Flow Is Choppy
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IP:
Super old....up that sheeeet.
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IP:
haha well fam...what i can tell from readin your OM is that you got alot to say...but you didnt come through on the "flow" part about it...it was like a ...choppy poem...ya feel...but the content behind it was good...sometimes that matter but others it doesnt...no hate fam...RTF on my open mic chinese food..pz bro..stay up...
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IP:
Fuck is a Chinese food, foo?
uppin.
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IP:
honestly i cant say i was feeling this to much either...flow does need a lot of work...add some multis and internals...conent was ok...keep doing ya thing fam. 1
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IP:
You switched it up too much...it was aite' but...
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