5-10bars
no crew,dickridin,hater votes
3-0 KO or 1st to 5 votes
check in spit 15 min after check in


Eli-22 = toonice = cityboi = Ghostrida = all DQ'ed for cheating

spit eli than ill spit after you

dis lookz like a good battle ya need to hurry up n battle tho i'll vote wen ya do

dac, the opposition pussed out, just means ur betta

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Leav feedbak on ma battlez an don't even think i kare bout winz maw fuka! : An' don't think i care bout ma record etha

yo i made da rules and u agreed u spit 1st and i would set everything up so now dat i set everything up u spit holla back

dawg i saw u say u were gunna spit first and if u can show me proof then ill spit it

yo it dont matter to me really who goes first so i'll go ahead and spit

you want it wit the kid, i'll split ya wig,
then go to your house and let her swallow my kids
so, dont fuck wit me and i wont fuck wit you
but if you got beef what the fuck you gon do
and if you comin you better come prepared
cause im comin wit that shit that makes Benladin scared
you cant rap with the king of rap im to serious
bullets come so fast make ya ass delirious
the next time you rap wit me, bring ya hole team
cause like soap, i'll wash away all your dreams

yo check in and spit so we can get dis voting thing on and poppin

ok I will check back when he drops sound good so far but check out this battle plz.
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127439

aight check it

Want it wit da Croz? Dawg Ima have to unleash da Beast
Murderin kids like you all day, like Im a fuckin Priest/
I slit this Eli dudes throat, and den take him out wit my 22
Got ya in a bodybag, homie now you know wat da Fuck Im gon do/
Fuck this shit, you tryin to Outtype Me
Put down da keyboard and fuckin Fight Me
Ima take dat fuckin smile off yo face Most Likely
Croz dat cat who stole yo lunch money, and Ripped yo Whitey Titeys/
Claimin to be hard by flashin a murdera in his Icon
But da MuthaFuckas in all White like he just got Jizzed On/
Fuck dis Game, Im puttin a clip to yo Brain, call me a Deuce-Deuce
Havin bullets goin In and Out yo body like we at an all day Porno Shoot/




da catholic priests who like had those kid incidents

structure was fucked on both accounts

Eli........you coule work on making your punches better becuase they was weak and didn really hi.......yourstructure was okay but could also use some work......keep elevating kid

DaCroz........your verse was better...........your punches hit harder then his and they stuck.......reword the ma lil bit so they hit a little bit harder and you could work on your structure in this verse aswell man....p.pc

v/Dacroz

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yo wuz good dis battle wuz kinda weak but both mc's did they thing i guess but punches were won by dacroz but overall flow and personals went to eli

vote=eli but eli if u want it wit da kid holla back

uppin dis battle

eli that was a pretty weak spit, u need to work alot on ur punches they dont hit that hard. flow was aight. Croz great punches i liked ur spit not ur best but beat dis cat flow elevate dat shizznit aight...one

v=Croz